Date: 23 Apr 2013 8:34:29 AM Title: A/N
Hey I really look forward to read the next in this story, it has gotten my interest, and I wait for the next chapter, and have for a long time, and I will keep checking up on it, to see if the next chapter is up soon, so please write again soon -smiles; I'd like to figure out what's going to happen in this story -smiles;
Date: 04 Jul 2009 10:34:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I normally don't read stories with only one or a few chapters wrote since so many are abandoned even if they do have a good start like yours. It's been 3 months since this first chapter. Are you going to return and continue this fresh, new idea for a story or will you join the ranks of a 'fly-by-nite' writer. So far it seems you have by letting the story get this old with no update. Sorry to sound harsh, but you show a good imagination and a talented writing style that I would like to continue enjoying reading.