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Reviewer: LolitaZero Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 5:41:06 PM Title: Meeting of the Clans

So is the Jikininki's group the one's who kidnapped Kagome and will use her for god like powers? Oh, do hurry with this story, it kills me. I want to know what happens.

Author's Response:

Jikininki thinks that the masked Agyptian on his side, he doesn't know there is another group wanting to use Kagome for their plans. At this point, Kagome is kidnapped by both sides. It works like this, Jikininki is up front about what he wants, the masked Agyptian is not. He's basically just using Jikininki. I'm not really going to the rush this story, if I do, its going to turn out to be crap. Please be patient, and I promise you'll enjoy it :)

~Sessakag

Reviewer: Rain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:58:19 AM Title: Meeting of the Clans

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Finally! Sesshy is here! I think that's so cute! He's only 25! A young buck! lol!

Update soon!

Reviewer: Rain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:57:12 AM Title: All is Lost

I almost cried at the end!

Poor Jamila!

I wonder what those symobols were for? They seem ominous.

Reviewer: Rain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:55:50 AM Title: Kagome

All I can say is damn!

That has to be the most discriptive chapter I've ever read anywhere else! Good Lord I felt like I was the one getting killed! 

You have to be one of the greatest writers I've ever seen!

Thanks for all your hard work! Its really paying off!

Reviewer: Rain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:54:05 AM Title: It All Begins

This Ranka guy seems to have remorse for what he's about to do so maybe he's not such a bad guy.

But on the other hand, even though he knew what he was about to do was wrong, he still did it. Not sure what to make of him as of yet.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Rain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:52:31 AM Title: Jamila's Decision

Ooooooooh noooooooooooooooo! Poor Jamilai!!!!!

Now how will she protect her daughter????

Oh and I totally understand about video games, the good ones are always addicting. XD

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Rain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:50:56 AM Title: The Date Has Been Set

Finally, Jamila will meet the "foreigners". I'm so excited! I wonder how she's going to react to them. For her sake, I hope she doesn't do anything crazy....but at the same time, if she does do something crazy it'll make the story more exciting!

Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Rain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:48:07 AM Title: Defiance

Poor Jamilia! She knows what's going on and her thick headed husband won't even listen to her!

That's just like a man!

Reviewer: Rain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:34:55 AM Title: Premonition

This is awesome! OMG it's so different from everything else I've read. You're very descriptive and it feels like I'm actually there in Agyptia!

That premonition sounds bad, I hope everything turns out okay!

Thanks for writing!

*Rain

Reviewer: LolitaZero Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 12:02:48 AM Title: Premonition

I like this story but it somewhat confuses me. Who are the people taking Kagome and why is she so important? I don't really understand, but I love the story.

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