Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:17:43 PM Title: A Frantic Search/A Sprinting Miko
Okayu i have read all the other chapters up to here. I like how you have this set up. I like how you have it chunked but. So like in small sections. Also i really like and cant wait to read the rest and if i dont like something i will tell you. But good luck and keep the good work.
Sincerly,
Anime_Babe_95
P.s. Sorry if i spelled any thing wrong. My fault.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:09:41 AM Title: Losing Everything/Feeling Nothing
It's not offensive. People like what they like. I enjoy torturing cats (by making them huggle me), especially if they don't have claws... Otherwise you end up a scratching post...
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:55:49 PM Title: A Confusing Discussion/A Much-Needed Bath
I like cats... They is cute and fluffy and independent. Plus they make funny noises, a cross between a meow and growl, if you pick them up and they don't want to be cuddled... I torture my brothers cat a lot... ^_^
Author's Response:
Really? Never been a cat person myself. I think long-haired cats are pretty upleasant in the looks department, but that's just me I guess. Their eyes are creepy too... it's like they see into your soul.
And they don't like what they see.
~Siki (clearly a dog person)
P.S. - I do like some cats, so don't take offense please:) It's just that said cats are few and far between.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:11:47 AM Title: Losing Everything/Feeling Nothing
Yeah, but since he can only bring her back once it would have to be something a lot more dramatic... wouldn't want to waste the one moment of true compassion on something trivial too soon in the story...
Author's Response: True that. But he got there just in time so no worries, eh? That smooooth, smooth boy ;D
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:56:37 AM Title: The Confrontation/A Warm Welcome
Yay! He saved her! Of course, if she died there'd be no story...
Author's Response: Weeellll there's always Tenseiga! If I forgot and killed her off, Sesshy could still come in and fix everything:)
Date: 02 Jul 2010 9:16:10 PM Title: Captor and Captive/An Interesting Arrival
Too bad she killed the gaurd, cause I'm pretty sure Sesshoumaru would have ripped him to shreds for placing his filthy hands on a pack member...
Date: 02 Jul 2010 1:57:43 PM Title: A Sour Mood/Darkness Descends
Uh-oh. And that is why you pay attention to what's going on around you and stay on alert. Especially if you're alone... You'd think she'd know that...
Author's Response: Silly Kagome! Tsk, tsk, tsk...
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:04:30 PM Title: A Frantic Search/A Sprinting Miko
I'm late, I'm late, for a very mportant date. No time to say hello, goodbye, I'm late, I'm late, I'm late! Sorry, just thought that was appropriate... Hopefully she'll make it on time! I don't think Lord Fluffy-sama appreciates tardiness. Hey, maybe he'll be an evil teacher and spank the naughty girl with a ruler...
Author's Response: haha! I like the way you think...
Date: 24 Jun 2010 9:19:37 AM Title: A Journey Begun/A Perfect Shot
I find I only really like Kagome in fanfiction. Everytime I watch the anime I wish she was alive so I could kill her... It's so annoying how one minute she's strong then the next she's weak. So far I like her best in your story. I think you captured perfectly the lost and twisted soul that our hapless heroine would become if she lost Inuyasha. She seems true to her anime-self but she's less annoying. I like the imagery of a broken spirit trying to pick itself up off the ground and put the pieces back together, only to find that they don't quite fit the way they did before... I just realized that that sounds completely deranged and morbid... Oh well ^_^
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your kind words!
I find that I must agree. Kagome is really annoying in the anime, and perhaps this is why I get such a kick out of torturing her the way I do.... is that wrong? *evil grin* kukuku!
It's okay. Come join the rest of us deranged ones when you've come to terms with it.
Many thanks,
Rain
Date: 20 Jun 2010 5:22:04 AM Title: An Offer Extended/Emotions Recognized
Yay! Another update!
I looked at your Dokuga page. I liked the picture of a Native American Kagome. I myself have some Indian heritage. I'm not entirely sure of the percentage, but I'm pretty sure it's 1/16th Cherokee on my mothers side and 1/8 Black Foot on my fathers.
So, the story you were planning based on the picture, would it be like a past life type thing?
Author's Response:
*GASP!* Stalkage!... I'm so flattered :D
Thank you very much.. I'm glad you liked it. The story I'm thinking about would probably be some type of exploration of past lives. I also thought it would be fun to incorporate some of the myths and legends I've been hearing since I was little. The story is really starting to form in my head so I'm not sure if I'll be able to finish this before the evil plunnies take over. Gah!
Thank you for reviewing :D
~Siki
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:29:38 AM Title: Frazzled Nerves/Strange Request
Guess he's figured out where the darkness came from... Hmm... Training with Fluffy-sama... That gives my perverted little self some fun ideas... This is gonna be fun, she has no idea what she just set herself up for. Evil fanfic writer! (I mean evil in way good way.)
Author's Response:
Mwuahahahahaha! Yes, I am quite the evil one. I take your compliment very much to heart:)
And I am rather jealous of her myself. The actual training may suck, but at the end of the day, at least she's getting hot and sweaty with Sho-sama!
... damn lucky Kagome...
Date: 12 Jun 2010 11:55:02 PM Title: A Story Told/An Appointment Made
Sesshy is smexy. So far they seem relatively in character. One of the pitfalls of Sesshoumaru/Kagome stories is that everyone always rushes it. I hope you don't because so far this promises to be a good story. Remember to take your time with the romance.
Author's Response:
Of course! If theres one thing that bugs me more than turnips in my pillow it's a rushed Sess/Kag romance! Why, I don't believe it's possible to get Sesshoumaru more out of character!
Actually... it is possible. But still. It's irritating.
Thank you for continuing to review! I have a lot of updates on these chapters to do. I got a notice on Dokuga about my chapters being too short so now I've got a bunch of revisions to throw in. You won't miss much if you don't go back and read though. :)
Date: 12 Jun 2010 11:46:53 PM Title: Uninterrupted Thoughts/Surprising Meeting
Plunnies are evil. They eat away at your soul if left alone... Bad plunny!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:15:21 PM Title: Realization/Newest Question
I Only Hope N Pray Tht Kagome Go Out There And Handle Ha Light Work!!
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:48:39 PM Title: Realization/Newest Question
Tried to sell your soul for Sesshoumaru lovin' lol, that's funny. So the interesting Sesshy is about to make his appearance, YIPPY!!!! Oh, just remember, you may not own him in real life but you can always make him your personal sex slave in your dreams...
Author's Response:
Mhmm... enter the smex on legs, Lord Fluffly-sama! I'm supahh excited too :D
And YES! My thoughts exactly... though somehow it's not the same... but it's all we've got right?
Thank you for your review :) I will probably be updating again soon, most likely this weekend. I'm just so excited about this story and the plunnies are killing me!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:44:32 PM Title: Losing Everything/Feeling Nothing
awwww
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:39:41 AM Title: Losing Everything/Feeling Nothing
Great story. I hope you update regularly, because I want to find out what's gonna happen.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I do plan on updating pretty frequently... at least trying... I mean well? :D
Thanks again and be sure to read chapter 2 now that it's up!