Date: 09 Mar 2008 11:28:58 AM Title: The Beginning
if i might make a suggestion as to where you should take it and this is coming from where i see is going is you switching it over to sesshoumaru run and have him thinking somethings like ill kill who ever has taken my son and upset my mate or something like that and while hes thinking that like have inu-no come in and have him really pissed off to and there both like growling and eyes starting to turn red and then like have them come up on kouga to add a twist and have him like saying he smelt kyo and a different sent come threw this way and then all then have inuyasha come up on the scene there like trying to kill kouga and accuseing him of taking kyo and stuff until like a mysterious voice like outta no where says he has kyo and like have sesshoumaru and inu-no both like say come out now and bring back the kid and have like somebody step out that nobody whould have suspected it would have been and then like have inuyasha say the person name and then like cut it off till the next chapter but thats just my idea you can use it or some parts of it if you like but i was just throwing that your way
All except for the 'likes' I like that idea! Thank you for the help in trying to figure out where it's going. I know exactly what I'm going to do. XD
Date: 08 Mar 2008 4:03:15 PM Title: Where'd He Go?
omg i love this story im glad u started updating again cant wait for more
It might be a little while before I update it, seeming as that cliffe was only there because of my writers block. I just don't know where to take the story from there. I mean, I know what's going to happen a bit later, but until then, even I'm lost in the dark. It'll one big journey though! Thanks for the Review. You're the first to do so since I've updated and it means a lot. You even did it before my #1 fan could. XD I'll try to do it within the next two weeks! Peace out.
Date: 04 Mar 2008 1:27:54 AM Title: Misgivings
ok, ok i am reviewing happy great chapter
stupid monk got damn u come on ofcourse sango is the one for u grrr
any ways lovley confersation in the beggining there haha kepp writing and i will so hold u hostage if you keep ransoming sesshoumaru u hear me good thats what i thought haha jk keep writing
Date: 04 Jan 2008 11:11:10 PM Title: The Beginning
omg i loved this story u really need to update it i would to finsh reading what u wrote i was so sad when inuyasha was killed but i think sess and kag should stay together u have to write more and let us know what happened
Author's Response: Inu Yasha didn't die... at least from what I remember from writing it.
Date: 23 Aug 2007 3:01:40 AM Title: Court Procedes
I remember reading this at A Single Spark. I liked how this plot was AU and started off with the problem at hand. As Admin, I removed the 2 author note chapter. Please only include your author notes in your chapters, even if you have to go back to edit your chapter that was written last to do so.
Oops, sorry about that. XD! Make sure to take care of that as soon as I can. Once again, sorry!
Date: 10 Aug 2007 6:22:54 PM Title: The Beginning
loved it great job!! :)
Thank you! You're my first Reveir too, which makes it all the more special! XD! Peace out.