Omg I loved your whole story, I couldn't stop reading, so I couldn't pull myself together to give a review before now. I'm really sorry, but it's just because I wanted it all. I ended up not getting much sleep because I just wanted to finish the story, to know what would happen. And by the way, I love that I could guess the people fast, I mean first introduction of the new kid. That got to be InuYasha I thought to myself, the next line InuYasha. Mr. Onigumo, his first name is Naraku, I just know. I was right. The strang girl talking to her, that's Sango. I was right. At the resturant, a few lines into the talk, It's InuYasha with his parents, I was right -laughs; I just love that I could guess it, because that means there is good details, and I love the details.

And now, I really, really, really like to know who turned her in, was it Bankotsu ? It was, wasn't it ? Or maybe Kagura, the real Kagura doesn't like Naraku, I can't imagine she would like him in this story, nothing spoke for it. She is just the type that would tell.. Isn't she ? God I want to knoooooooowwwwwwww !!!!!!
-coughs; I mean... -coughs; I like your story ^_^ -beams;
Please tell me ?!?!?!?!?!?!

Greetings
Mikazuki