Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:18:59 PM Title: Chapter 17 The Trial
Can Naraku die in this chapter so that we don't have to worry about him trying to kill kagome and her unborn child? Also can we have just a little bit more citrus and fluff? Other than that I think that the story is coming along pretty well. Oh yeah and it's spelled tetsusaiga and hiraikotsu.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 9:58:38 PM Title: Chapter 16 Two Months Later
okay.. first off...
Dai needs to die :)
Kaiya... im glad she went bring great fortune to the family!
onibaba! COOL BEANS MAN! she brought kags family to the past n everything awesome sauce! wonder how they like it tho...
inuyasha's demon ant playn NO games! lol
sesshomaru aint eitha!
glad koga and them cats are on their side! and koga knows what respect is ! lol
... am i missing somethin?
OH... i hope everyone eventually accepts Kaiya as leader :( or somebody else is gonna die *coughs* the dragon *coughs*
sorry been MIA!!!! but you know how them holidays go...
Author's Response: No Problem with the MIA I have actually had a bit of writer's block but the ideas are coming back full force. Dai will be schedualed for an exicution but it ain't gonna happen. Dai got a buddy or two. GRRRR! And yes Demon Inu don't play!!!!!! Lol I'm Glade you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 8:15:36 AM Title: Chapter 14 Meeting the Youkai Tashios
Oooohhh boy. Bomb's away! Things are about to get a whole lot more interesting, aren't they? Not that they weren't before, but still.
I like where this is going, kind of. I just hope people aren't as much of idiots as I fear you will make them.
Keep up the good work!
Date: 01 Jul 2013 1:28:47 AM Title: Chapter 13 Kaiya's Future and A Spy in the West
i like that Onibaba is their grandma! lol love it actually its fitting for that family
i knew Dai wasn't shit..
i was WONDERING what Naraku was up to
who tf is this snake?
"The one who will save us all?" <- lost me there, did it happen before like in the series or will it happen? was that prophecy for the story? will inuyasha be the killer of those snakes and naraku and possibly dai?
aagghh kaiya's prophecy was soo vague! (dnt change it) i wanna know if she's gonna be a great queen or nott lol
in one of the earlier chapters you said it was 12 weeks later when they found out the sex of the baby.. just to remind you it helps when the author knows of inconsistencies..
i dnt think inuyasha made a mistake at all when agreeing to let kaiya be heir.... honestly i thin she'll be pretty powerful with the shikon miko as her mother and the inu no taisho family as her father!
Yeah I know I kind of messed up on the whole two week thing. I guess I confused myself. Lol thanks for catching it. With the one who will saves us all, so far the true inu pack is very few and far between cause of ones like Dai. You know infighting. all the other demons living in the West are diffreant spiecies. I'm glad you like the chapter. I hadn't intended to turn Onibaba into the grandmother but I thought it a nice twist. Plus it opens up more opertunities for Kaiya. As for the snake... you'll fing out . Thanks for reading and your review. I'll have the next chapter soo.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 9:23:30 AM Title: Chapter 12 The Western Palace
freakin awesome man!!
i like kaiya...
i think my kids gone have japanese names...
so these enemies are snakes? very fitting
umm... dai needs to get the hell over it times have changed!
Author's Response: Yeah. I felt Kaiya really fits here. And Dai is gonna be more then a little bit of trouble. Thanks for your review it's always good to hear from you.
Date: 28 Jun 2013 9:49:15 AM Title: Chapter 11 Kikyo Learns About the Pup
lol damn kagome just call ya soul back and kill the bitch!
Amane - sound of heavens
Eiko - prosperous child
emi - blessed with beauty
himeko - princess child
hisayo - changed era
isaye - blessed with merit
katsuye - blessed with victory
mitsuki - beautiful moon
mika - new moon, beautiful smell, three trees together, quick, nimble
saya - swift arrow
Author's Response: Yeah she should, but where's the fun in that? Lol. Thanks for all the names I'm gonna have a hard time choosing. I'm using one for the chapter but I might change it. I wasn't really feelin it.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 9:47:03 PM Title: Chapter 11 Kikyo Learns About the Pup
Okay to help you with the spelling of the words from chapter 4: Tessaiga (sword) and Hiraikotsu (boomerang). And baby name suggestion: Akahana- means Red Rose and Asuka- means Smell of Tomorrow. I thought that was a cool meaning. Smell=inuyoukai. :)
Author's Response: Thank You for the spelling corrections, That's the only way the story can Improve. Ans I like both the baby names, especially red rose. Hmmmm which one which one. Any way It's nice to hear from you, thanks for reading.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 1:59:29 AM Title: Chapter 10 And I'm a......
Dai can suck it... there are too many people happy about this!
and yayyyy its a girl!!! she gne be a handfull!!
Author's Response: Thanks fro you review. And If you'd like to suggest baby names, please do. I only know a few and they've been used SO much. Thanks for reading.
Date: 26 Jun 2013 9:40:14 AM Title: Chapter 9 Enter Kimi Lady of the West
LMAO!!! soul eating man stealing walking pile of dirt...
i dont like her either
but MANNN i thought mama sessh was fina cause some trouble lol good thing everybody's so cordial.! i honestly believe its ONLY because sesshomaru hasnt mated and conceived an heir yet! hehe
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm trying to get all the people who are usually on the same side of with this plan but there are gonna be some people not ok with jr. and I'm gonna bring back an old enemy to team up Naraku so things are gonna get a litte tougher for everyone pro hanyou lord lol.
Date: 25 Jun 2013 10:55:41 PM Title: Chapter 8 Over Protective Hanyou Father To Be... A Doctor's Worst Nightmare!
lol that doc was fina get it!
accusing kagome of such a thing.. smh!
mannn i cant wait to find out the sex! err sexes!
i like this overprotective inuyasha tho.
Thanks for you support my friend :) So here's a brain teaser who do you think Kimi is? It'll be someone unexpected and Inu wlii probabaly wet himself
Date: 25 Jun 2013 10:44:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 Telling My Mom That I'm Sexually Active... And Married...And Pregnant
my friend (no really its my friend lol) is due in nov and she just found out the sex of the baby at the beginning of this month so doing the math... at least 4 months into the pregnancy you can tell the sex of the baby
Date: 25 Jun 2013 1:14:50 AM Title: Chapter 6 The Scent of Life and the Prejudice of Man
how dare they request somethin so repulsive ?? disgrace to the human race!
but YAY PUPPIES!!!
and this next chap should be interesting lol
IM MARRIED NOW!!
(*drops cooking utensils*)
Date: 24 Jun 2013 8:33:34 PM Title: Chapter 5 InuYasha's Demon Uleashed
THAT WAS YOUR FIRST LEMON?!?! ROCK ON DUDE!! IT WAS AWESOME! NOTE: You can NEVER do too much with a lemon. The more details the better!
Hiroshi... blahh i'm glad inuyasha tortured him i expected nothing less!
hmm... boy,, girl,,, BOTH! to get the best of both worlds !
Author's Response: Wow, you are the person I have the most reviews from :) Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like the story. Both huh? Yeah I think I could work with that. Thanks again. peace!