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Reviewer: karavinemarinas Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2015 1:49:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Amazing story....Please update soon...I would really want to know what happens next....Thanks...

Reviewer: Jinjo529 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 2:04:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

Your story is amazing so far 

it has me hooked can't wait for nxt chapter update soon pleeeeease!! <3 



Author's Response: Hey, sorry for the story being so abscent. I usually don't take this long to update anything. But, unfortunatly my computer broke down on me. I actually just got it back today (3/22/14)i'll try to have an update by the end of this week.

Reviewer: Inulover1993 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:57:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

loved this chapter i hope they work things out n kikyo gets kicked to the curb in a slightly evil and diabolical way lol thanks look forward to your next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Haha, thanks for the review. lol, such a vindictive way of thinking! But, you'll have to keep reading to find out what happens to Kikyo. :D

Kriss 

Reviewer: ghost_youkai Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2014 4:25:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

I can't wait to see what plot is cooking up. At first, I thought Kikyo was generally concerned and all, but now it just seems to be convenient, too convenient. I'm just curious about the though, maybe someone is taking it? Won't know until the next chapter hopefully?

Author's Response:

Good observations, guess you'll have to keep reading to find out. Thanks for the review :)

 

Kriss 

Reviewer: ghost_youkai Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:18:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

Intriguing, very intriguing. I love the direction this in going in or so I hope. Can't wait for the next one ^_^

Keep up the good work!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I think you'll be pleased with the plot twisters to come in future chapters. 

 Kriss 

Reviewer: ghost_youkai Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 12:37:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

This chapter flowed beautifully together. The encouter between them were really emotionally jerking and I must admit that I teared up several times throughtout the chapter. Amazing work chapter ^_^

Author's Response:

Aw, thanks so much! I reallyThis chapter was difficult for me to write because of the heavy level of emotion from each character. But, I'm glad that you are enjoying my story and please keep reading! It will be worth it! New update soon, either by the end of today or early tomorrow. 

 Kriss 

Reviewer: Inulover1993 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 10:51:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved this chapter! It's really flowing nicely I await the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It makes me happy to know you are enjoying it so much! New update by the end of today, or early tomorrow! :D

Reviewer: ghost_youkai Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 12:50:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

I don't personally like first point of view stories, but this is just amazing so far. I love how we are getting to see and feel what the characters are going through and I HOPE you update soon ^_^

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying my story so far. In all honesty, i don't really like first person stories too because I feel as though they are a little harder to follow. But, I wanted to challenge myself with writing this. That is why, instead of just having the characters do open monologues (which is what most authors do) I chose to make my first person story interecting with my audience. If you noticed, the characters speaking are speaking directly to you; rather than just 'speaking in general'. I also thought that by writing this way, it makes the story a little more personal. You proved my theory by sayinf you "see and feel what the characters are going through". Thank you for your support, please keep reading, and I will update soon. Probably between tonight and tomorrow, but no later than tuesday! :p

Reviewer: Inulover1993 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 11:42:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved this, and i like the idea of things! cant wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thank you for your support on my story. I am very happy to see you are enjoying it. I did update with a second chapter a few days ago, i'm not sure if you seen it or not. Also, I will be writing a 3rd update no later than Tuesday! :D

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