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Reviewer: ghost_youkai Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 12:50:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

I don't personally like first point of view stories, but this is just amazing so far. I love how we are getting to see and feel what the characters are going through and I HOPE you update soon ^_^

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying my story so far. In all honesty, i don't really like first person stories too because I feel as though they are a little harder to follow. But, I wanted to challenge myself with writing this. That is why, instead of just having the characters do open monologues (which is what most authors do) I chose to make my first person story interecting with my audience. If you noticed, the characters speaking are speaking directly to you; rather than just 'speaking in general'. I also thought that by writing this way, it makes the story a little more personal. You proved my theory by sayinf you "see and feel what the characters are going through". Thank you for your support, please keep reading, and I will update soon. Probably between tonight and tomorrow, but no later than tuesday! :p

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