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Reviewer: kagome8657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2009 8:22:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh my kimi (kimi means god) i think you could have done a lot better with this story i really like but it ended at like a good part and it was more like a summary i think you should've made it longer then a lot more would totally be interested in the story

Reviewer: Dark_Author Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2008 2:38:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think you should continue it.  This first chapter is short, but it's good.  I'd like to know what happens next, personally.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I really didn't know that I wrote that well, so that's a relief! Yeah, I want to continue this, and I have a lot of ideas for it...



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really didn't know that I wrote that well, so that's a relief! Yeah, I want to continue this, and I have a lot of ideas for it...

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