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but wat i said earlier was my opinion so dont mind me

LMAO! the last 7 sentences or so were hilarious, i love it when Kagome puts that innocent voice on then says SIT. please continue, i want to know what's going to happen to Rin.

You need not worry about reviews. Your story is pretty good, don't depend on others to help you finish it, your doing great!!!  I'm glad I came across it, I've been reading it all day.  Clam down relax ^_^  all is good.  Sometimes asking for reviews can turn your fans off.  I don't review till I read the third chapter, I like to give a story and the author a chance before I say anything.  I've read finished stories with zero reviews, that's confidence!  Hang in there you've got some readers hooked.  But I would ask my readers who Kagome should choose, I have trouble with that to.  I write fan fiction for my friends but I'm not brave enough to post yet I always have trouble choosing, who can?  Two hot demons, come on who can choose?  Since I can't choose and you can't choose, let the girl have her cake and eat it to.  Let her have both, then the brothers have to get along, that would be fun to write.  Don't choose, lucky girl.  Let her have it all!!!  I'm really enjoying your story, you have nothing to worry, just write!  I'm not putting you down for asking for reviews, I can understand your anxiety in wanting to write a good fic and feed back can be helpful and good sometimes and it can also be hurtful, just relax it will come. You'll see, reviews will flood in as you continue on.  I love the emotion you described when Sess ran out into the rain confussed, didn't know how to handle the emotions that rushed into him, someone like him it had to be terriable fighting his pride and just afraid of what he was feeling and not understanding it.  I could see him standing in the rain lightening flashing around him as he pounded the ground, the human he considered a daughter is in danger and he is helpless to help her.  Excellent moment written wonderfully, should be very proud of that.  My fav, part, excellent!  I just wished that Kagome took Shippou with her, but she did change her mind about going home at the last moment.   I do like your Kagome, I do hope she gets her warmth and spark back, I liked that about her, but being hurt can mess with you badly sometimes.  So are they all going to join forces now and go after Narku?  This can get very interesting, I can't wait for more.  Don't worry I don't review every chapter, I usually read a good story to the end, or as far as the author gets on it.  I hope you plan to finish this no matter what.  Relax, the reviews will come your doing great.  In truth it dosen't matter what we think it's what you think, it's your story go for it!  Still I say let the girl have both hot demons!  make both of them approach eachother (brothers) with the idea at the same time, can you see how funny that would be, Sess swallowing his pride, and Yash swallowing his anger all because they are madly in love with a human?  Make Kagome think about it.  Hey, it's your story do as you please, I'm getting carried away, told you sometimes reviews can be a bad thing. ^_^  Go for, Write on!

Much Love

InuAngel

Happy new year to you too loving the story