Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:53:07 AM Title: Chapter 1A New Beginning
It's beautiful. Really beautiful. How you describe their emotions rocked mine. I almost thought that they'd ended up separating again lol.
Anyway, you were able to capture their characters and maintain it all through out the story. And when Kagura says, "Yes, My Lord" I felt like sobbing. Finally, she's free... :)
Date: 26 Sep 2008 4:54:08 PM Title: Chapter 1A New Beginning
I loved this so much. I especially loved the part where you made rin push them together. So many people pair rin and sesshomaru together and it doesn't make any sence. This story is very realistic. i luv it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I like realistic/canon pairings, and I always thought Sesshomaru and Kagura deserved to be togehter! :)