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Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2008 8:17:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice... I think in a S/K situation, this would be a plausible way to get them together....well, AU wise... Canon... well, that is another way.

I like this!

Reviewer: UtterChaos247 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2008 12:46:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

ooo you NEED to add another chapter or two!  ((maybe you could dwel on the 'borderline benefits' of Kags and Kei?  you know, just to piss Sesshoumaru off))

Reviewer: snowbird Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2008 11:13:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Chuckle, laugh, chuckle.  If the rest of the story is as funny as the first chapter, you've got a winner here.  I'm especially glad you're keeping them as youkai and made Kagome into a kick-ass female.  I agree with Kei, they do make a 'cute' couple.  Kei sounds like a hottie, too.  Maybe she has another female friend to match him with as payback.

Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2008 11:08:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

laughing my butt off this is too good thanks Keva a great story!

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