Date: 17 Dec 2008 12:29:53 AM Title: Chapter 26-Finding Out the Past
Im enjoying this story a lot
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll keep it coming.
Maiko Anna
Date: 16 Dec 2008 4:18:34 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Her Own Captive
Inuyasha had better rein in his temper and think things through for once. I know he won't believe Sesshoumaru but he'll have to agree to cooperate when Kagome says she wants to be Sesshoumaru's mate. Then Kikyo will be the biggest question mark.
Date: 16 Dec 2008 2:16:49 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Her Own Captive
That is so clever ! Kagome can't return because in her heart she wants to stay and be with Sesshomaru. I hope they get a time to be alone soon, so she can learn how he feels and they can finally stop the moping.
Author's Response:
Ahhh .... moping the byproduct of love. :-)
Maiko Anna
Date: 16 Dec 2008 1:24:16 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Her Own Captive
good as always
Date: 15 Dec 2008 10:11:14 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Bittersweet Return
Excellent last two chapters, not just the chapters, the entire story is excellent! It's more than that I just can't find another word to express it. I'm glad I finally got a chance to catch up! I love the idea that Sessy's emotions effect the weather inside his barrier, it suites him perfectly. I like how he was surprised with his own depth of feeling by the magnatitude of his storms. That chapter when he was losing it, was beautifully written. I could see him standing there amoung the chaos of the storm straining to hold back his emotions, something that was new for him. That was some fierce writing! As for Kikyo I'm not sure how to judge her, she's just desperate to live, but to live at expence another life is just... well the dead girl ain't in her right mind. That was an excellent way to get their father involved, that was the only way Sessy would listen and put aside his pride so fast. he respected his father no matter how he felt about him having a human wife and Inuyasha. Also, he admitted to himself that he needed Kagome and would do anything for her. Awwwww! I love your story it's like your right there with them. Update soon Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
Author's Response:
Thanks I always love to hear that I did a good job. I didn't know if I would be able to paint what I was seeing in my head with words. I wanted everyone to really be able to visualize Sesshomaru's powers maturing. I wanted the feeling to go past words and really drag you in. I hope that I did a good job. I am so glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great review. All my best.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2008 6:35:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - InuYasha's Decision
ooh i mean my!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2008 6:34:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - InuYasha's Decision
♥yay! i'm 101!! i feel like i should pay you too! ooh i'm god it's soo good!!! keep it up!!!! your never boring!!!!!!!♥
Author's Response:
I am glad to see that you are enjoying. Hope that I can keep it up. Thanks a ton!!!
Maiko Anna
Date: 15 Dec 2008 6:09:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - InuYasha's Decision
i know this isn't a review , but i wanted to be your 100th <3 & answer yoru question . of course youre not boring me . i just want it to end , because iwant to know what happens. but at the same time , i don't want it to end because it's sooo good . i feel like i should be paying you .
Author's Response:
I am glad that you like, and thanks for being 100. Your enjoyment is payment enough! I will keep the chapters coming.
Maiko Anna
Date: 15 Dec 2008 3:53:35 PM Title: Chapter 24-Enemies in Need
I was having such a crappy day, but it's all good now ^o^ I'm glad you're not crazily optimistic. It's true, sometimes in life things just don't work out the way you plan it too.
:O ! The well closed? You never fail to suprise me.
Blah, I hope Kikyo dies. I have no clue why I dislike her so much; I'm starting to think it's unhealthy how much I loathe her, considering she's a fictional character .
Just out of curiousity, how long are you planning to keep this story going for?
Author's Response:
Glad it made your day better. To be honest I don't really know how long it is going to be. Is it getting too long? I hope I am not starting to get boaring. :-P
Maiko Anna
Date: 15 Dec 2008 6:32:51 AM Title: Chapter 24-Enemies in Need
wow the well not working, Inuyasha and Sesshy working together this story is so good. cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you like it, they are brothers right, the least they can do it TRY and work together. Enjoy.
Maiko Anna
Date: 15 Dec 2008 3:16:50 AM Title: Chapter 24-Enemies in Need
Hooray! She can't use the well. Otherwise, no telling how long she would have stayed in the future from her thoughts. Now if only those two stubborn brothers will just work together.
Author's Response:
Can't run from the truth forever. Happy reading I will be updating soon.
Maiko Anna
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2008 3:10:34 AM Title: Chapter 24-Enemies in Need
oh oh the well is closed oh wow!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2008 11:11:56 PM Title: Chapter 23 - There Must Be a Way
Does Sesshoumaru's dream/ vision have credibility? Would it work?
I will see what I can come up with as in illustrations. I would not offer to pay people to draw any for the fanfic.
Author's Response:
No, no, let me clarify that I wasn't refering to paying as much as trading. Stories and art, and such. I will have to change how I worded that. I would be glad see anything that you have got though. I can't wait.
Maiko Anna
Date: 14 Dec 2008 10:08:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - InuYasha's Decision
I just read your answer to another reviewer about not promising a happy ending because real life does not always end like that. I hope you don't do a sad ending because when I read, it's to escape reality where there are only happy endings. The characters can have all the problems they want during the story but in the end everything is suppose to work out for a happy ending. Why should I want reality when I'm living it. Whenever I come across a completed story that catches my interest, I always check the last chapter. If it doesn't end happy, I don't read the story. I know I'm taking a chance whenever I read a story that's being updated.
Author's Response:
Just hang in there I can promise that you won't be disappointed. There may be some tragedy along the way though. An ending is only happy if it is the way that you want it. There wouldn't be much of a point to writing this if nothing worked out so don't worry too much. I plan to make this a story that you will want to read to get away from real life. Hope I was able to ease your fears.
Maiko Anna
Date: 14 Dec 2008 9:51:16 PM Title: Chapter 23 - There Must Be a Way
It's about time she began to wake up. She better not go through the well because she may seal it to keep Inuyasha from coming through so she can have some quiet time. That would interfere with Sesshoumaru's plan. Now to convince everyone involved.
Date: 14 Dec 2008 7:14:34 PM Title: Chapter 23 - There Must Be a Way
I picked an excellent time to procastinate. Though I really should be writing my paper. ; Ugh, Kikyo gets to live? She's such a grouch. Well I suppose it's best that they all get a happy ending. It was really unexpected though, what you came up with. I was expecting Myoga to inform Kagome on the situation and then she'd return to Sesshomaru; something on the lines of that. ; This was totally unexpected.
Thanks for the quick update. And goodluck with finding artists <3
Author's Response:
I still have a few surprises up my sleeve. Working everyone together will be hard, I make no promises for a happy ending though. Life just isn't that way. We'll see what I come up with, either way I hope that you are enjoying. Thanks for the review. Happy Reading, the next chapter is coming today or tomorrow, depending on how much I can sift through in my head tonight.
Maiko Anna
Date: 14 Dec 2008 6:31:03 PM Title: Chapter 23 - There Must Be a Way
good chapter, kinda short though...hmm..its funny I read your last chapter and wrote a review and then saw your new chapter (this one) on the homepage. Ha you updated early.
I would help you with the pictures of your fic but I'm not a good artist. Well anyway, what I wanted to say was that if you're truly looking for someone to with images of your fanfic then you could try and the site I write on, I don't know if you have an account on Fanfiction (dot) net? or media miner (dot) org?
There might be people that would like to help you. Many people have links on thier profile (going to a different site) saying for people to look at their images that they (or others) drew for thier fic. I forgot what the site is called though. I'll let you know if it comes to me.
Hope that helps...Take care-
Lady Nefertiti.
Author's Response:
Thanks tons for the info. I just joined Fanfiction(dot)net, but am still waiting for profile appoval. :-< Day or so more. I will be posting this story on there as well. Hope that all is well. Thanks again.
Maiko Anna
Date: 14 Dec 2008 6:16:50 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Bittersweet Return
Great update on the fic. I hope that Kagome and Sesshomaru make-up soon. It's so sad....(sigh)
Take care-
Lady Nefertiti.
Author's Response:
If they don't figure it out soon it's going to kill one of them, but I doubt I could let that happen. We'll have to see. :-) Enjoy the story and thanks for the feedback... it's always appreciated.
Maiko Anna
Date: 14 Dec 2008 12:20:25 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Bittersweet Return
His pain brought tears to my eyes while I wanted to just slap Inuyasha out of Kagome's mind. Her thoughts are so hung up on Inuyasha that she could not sense the turmoil in Sesshoumaru's aura. Right now I feel very pissed at Kagome. I'm tired of her whining over the Inuyasha/Kikyou thing.
Author's Response:
Sooner or later she is gonna have to wake up... or I will have to write her out. I don't think that would be too well recieved though so I am going to go with waking the heck up. I am glad that I was able to portray Sesshomaru's pain that well. Hope that you are enjoying. Thanks for the review... always a pleasure to read.
Maiko Anna
Date: 13 Dec 2008 11:05:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Bittersweet Return
i love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2008 10:29:10 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Bittersweet Return
it is so sad Inu needs to S**T or get off the pot and decide
Author's Response:
Never heard it put better. :-P
Maiko Anna
Date: 13 Dec 2008 7:42:26 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Bittersweet Return
hmpf , kagome should choose to leave inuyasha . i hope she returns to sesshmaru soon , how can she be so clueless with the whole storm? update soon , let's say .. sunday ? i'm kidding , i know you probably have a super busy life . thanks for updating frequently (:
Author's Response:
Life is busy, but... I think that you just might have another update tonight. I am working on the next chapter. If not today than without a doubt tomorrow. I am glad that you have been enjoying.
Maiko Anna
Date: 11 Dec 2008 8:30:12 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Questions of the Heart
good love this chapter.
Date: 11 Dec 2008 2:51:04 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Questions of the Heart
>.< i just noticed all the errors i made,
sorry about that i was in a rush .
Author's Response: No worries. :-)
Date: 11 Dec 2008 12:24:53 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Questions of the Heart
This chapter is so sad.. (wants to cry) she left him?! lets hope she gets a clue and decides to come back next chapter.
Or maybe she'll get lucky and get attacked by a demon and Sesshomaru has to come and save her and when she's on the brink of death (but doesn't die) they confess their love and everyone lives happily ever after.
So uh...please update soon. This fic is excellent by the way.....
Lady Nefertiti.
Author's Response:
Thanks tons. I don't think anyone is dying just yet, there is still so much to write. I wish that I had more time to spend on it. Happy reading. The next chapter should be done soon.
Maiko Anna