I think I reviewed this before at A Single Spark, but I cannot help it.... I need to review it here. I enjoyed each ficlet immensely. Each was carefully plotted and executed with finesse. Now, I have not admitted to being into extreme until early 2006, and this does a great job. The imagery and detail are fantastic. I am almost wanting a fanfic with me, Kag and Sess. *wiggle eyebrow* Would be a perfect birthday present for me next month...lol

I have enjoyed all your fanfics and this one is definitely one of my favs.

You know... I am just getting all hot and bothered by the interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru in this. That is okay though... I like it. ;)

I really like the way that you have really kept with Kagome's character. With her ability to make friends, it is no surprise to see the Thunder Brothers supporting her, unlike the anime/manga. Then again, you also even wrote how they met... classic Kagome. :)

Author's Response:

Hot and bothered, huh?  Well, I'm sharpening my hentai tools for this one.  I'm going to try to keep it romantic, but in a naughty way.  If you take my meaning...LOL

I'm trying desperately to keep Kagome as Kagome.  Sesshoumaru...well...let's just say that with OTHER people, I'm going to try to maintain the integrity of his character.

That is really sad, and it surprised me to find Kagome's mother to actually say what she did. It is good that nothing escalated beyond words between them.

Author's Response: Kagome's mother, while willing to accept and embrace the relationship between her daughter and Sesshoumaru, is also a miko in this story.  As such, she feels that there are some things that must come first.  The good of all coming before the happiness of a few, for instance.

I like this story as it kind of ties some past stuff. I would like to see a little flashback as the past is kind of muddled between the two. However, I do like how this is rolling.

As a note, I am removing all extra excerpts/ omake from fanfics. Please only include a chapter note or end note. No side conversations from the story. It takes away from the story and wastes space. This is something that is in the news archive of this site that I have stated about a month ago. Thanks!

The love scene is much more realistic than I have read in a while and for that I have to thank you. It is almost endearing the way they have come together and for once Inu Yasha is not the gruff and crude hanyou.

Author's Response:

I tried to make the reader see that Inuyasha was also a virgin as living the life of a hanyou, as he had, I would assume he would not have had any chances to mate before. I hope the innocence and wonder on both their parts came through well.

~*Luce*~

This is simply hilarious. When I first read this fanfic, I did not expect this type of plot. Bravo!

This is a nice stage you have set. I am intrigued on how Sesshoumaru had decided he liked men, but then again perhaps he is instead a bi. It would go well to think that. Trust me, I accidentally at a drunk party made out with a gay man. And he was like Jakotsu... he liked breasts. ;)

Author's Response:

I seem to have made a lot of heads turn with this one. What can I say, I like things a little on the strange side :)

Oh, all of my gay friends have infatuations with some part of the female body. My old roomie loved breasts, the bigger the better. Makes me wonder if it was really the sci-fi element that got him watching Ghost In The Shell...

This is a bit different, but a pleasant plot view. I do enjoy a story that involves Sesshoumaru's household and how he runs things, rather than dally in the countryside on patrol.

I am already intrigued...

I do not think Kagome should be dipped in anything. Frankly, it is a taboo, but it is a matter of opinion.

Kagome should try to respect the decision and she can voice her opinion, but constantly doing it is rude. On the other hand, what should have been included was Inu Yasha explaining himself to Kagome.

I hope to see something in words to Kagome's acceptance. It is highly odd for Kagome not to be an accepting person considering that she is from (using real timeline and when the anime was originally created), a 21st century girl who knows about this thing goes on. It is nothing new to her. It is a bit OOC for Kagome.

Otherwise, I like the plot. Truthfully, I like even more a I/K/S plot. There was a story I read once on AdultFFnet and it was superb on the relationship between all three.

Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply; I forgot that I hadn't.

I wasn't specifically talking about this fic when I commented on Kagome being dipped in acid. I don't like her in general. She seems completely useless, annoying and childish to me. *shrug* But then, it's a matter of opinion.

I know she was OOC (I was working towards my complete obsession with IC stuff, like I am now), so I redid this. Is she more to your liking now? I can't see her as being absolutely supporting (we're all selfish, she's no different), so she's still in quite a bitter/sad state. And what's nothing new to her? The fact that they're gay or the incest?

You know... Hearing that you like I/K/S even more than this plot, is like a backhanded compliment. It sort of hurts. Sort of. And you already know of my standing with the aforementioned threesome. Glad you like the plot though.

Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it. Hopefully Kagome's slightly more IC now.  

I hope Kagome admits what is going on soon. It would not be good for her to continue on and I hope that Inu and Kag get together as well. I would not mind a three-some (I/K/S), but you already know my wishful thinking on one between the three. I am always hopeful. ;)

I think it is kind of funny how Sesshoumaru is about having a child.

I am enjoying this as it goes and eagerly await the next addition.

Author's Response:

Ooo... I don't want to spoil the story, so forgive me and my vague answers and comments. As the story progresses I'll talk about more things easier, but until then, I'm pretty much turning a blind eye. Sorry. So, no comments about Kagome from me.

I/K/S? I can't stand it, to be honest. I can't see Sesshomaru taking interest in the female species. I can see him thinking of them as weak or a waste of time, unless it is to provide an heir. He has lands to lord over, after all and Naraku to track down. More over than that, I don't think Inuyasha would be willing to share with his 'jack ass' of a brother, let alone share Kagome.

I have to say, it makes me giggle too. Sesshomaru doesn't seem like one to have a kid; he's so solemnn and not-fun. Not boring, mind you, he's just... Not lovable in the way babies would like. He's just going to have to get used to it, I suppose. Unless he really does kill off D. I've already grown fond of the bub though! *clings to Sesshomaru's stomach*

I'm very glad to hear that. The next chapter will be up by the end of the week. I think I've already said it, but I have 14 chapters done already so updating will be faster until I have to write them between updates. Then we get to wait 2 weeks between updates. (Yay.)

Thanks for reviewing; I appreciate it! ^_^ I hope yo uenjoy the rest of the story as well. 

I remember the first time I read this and remember thinking this piece was perfectly written as I could feel the mood. The description is amazing. I am really happy to see this posted here on IYFF and thank you from the bottom of my heart.

I really like how you have the characters well written. I am usually a SessKag fan, but there is always something wonderful about a Kag/Koga story.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm a Sessh/Kag fan too, and I'm working on a story for them, but I've always had a soft spot for Kouga, and for ONCE I wanted him to have his heyday, LOL.

 Thanks again, it means a lot!!!