Penname: Taiyoukai_Nile [Contact] Real name: Nile
Member Since: 02 Aug 2007
Membership status: Administrator
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Damned by Raven_Clover Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Inu Yasha finally realizes just how bad he treated the only one he truly loved.


Categories: Angst/ Drama
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 591 Read Count: 219
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2007 Updated: 06 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Damned

This is pretty good. I usually hate the wallowing that some angst go through and really it is the author's choice on where to take the fanfic. The fanfic is very short, but it takes all kinds to get to the point.

Summary: In a bar... on a train... at the symphony... A collection of Sess/Kag oneshots with a common theme - exhibitionism.
Categories: Adult
Characters: Kagome Higurashi, Sesshoumaru
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20819 Read Count: 3368
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2007 Updated: 20 Feb 2009
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Exhibition III - Crescendo

I think I reviewed this before at A Single Spark, but I cannot help it.... I need to review it here. I enjoyed each ficlet immensely. Each was carefully plotted and executed with finesse. Now, I have not admitted to being into extreme until early 2006, and this does a great job. The imagery and detail are fantastic. I am almost wanting a fanfic with me, Kag and Sess. *wiggle eyebrow* Would be a perfect birthday present for me next month...lol

I have enjoyed all your fanfics and this one is definitely one of my favs.

Summary: Feature

Sesshoumaru wanted more than a mate. He wanted her, Kagome. 

Surrounded by those that would stand between them, they will take on the prejudices of the modern world while forging an unbreakable bond in the fires of his Hallowed Desire.

Feature fanfic


Categories: Adult
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128295 Read Count: 24629
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2007 Updated: 01 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2007 Title: Hallowed Desire

I like the angle on this fanfiction. It is your typical Sesshoumaru, but hairier. I would imagine he would be just as sexy. ;) You have always had a way to capture the characters perfectly and execute a perfect plot. This story also shows that very thing. Thank you so much for joining. You have always been a favourite of mine in the fanfiction world.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Given that this had been originally intended to be a one-shot, I think the plot has been borne more of my imagination than any other one I've done.  One reviewer once said that this was a typical story, but done differently.  LOL  Given the massive amounts of fanon out there, that I can still manage to put a different spin on something old is as good as doing something off the wall.

Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2007 Title: Hallowed Desire

You know... I am just getting all hot and bothered by the interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru in this. That is okay though... I like it. ;)

I really like the way that you have really kept with Kagome's character. With her ability to make friends, it is no surprise to see the Thunder Brothers supporting her, unlike the anime/manga. Then again, you also even wrote how they met... classic Kagome. :)

Author's Response:

Hot and bothered, huh?  Well, I'm sharpening my hentai tools for this one.  I'm going to try to keep it romantic, but in a naughty way.  If you take my meaning...LOL

 

I'm trying desperately to keep Kagome as Kagome.  Sesshoumaru...well...let's just say that with OTHER people, I'm going to try to maintain the integrity of his character.

Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2007 Title: Hallowed Desire

Good riddens to Tsubaki. The scene was very intense and I like how you pulled both characters through the mess.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Action scenes are fun, but hard for me.  Getting it to flow quickly while still giving the neccesary details can be a drag.

Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2007 Title: Hallowed Desire

That is really sad, and it surprised me to find Kagome's mother to actually say what she did. It is good that nothing escalated beyond words between them.

Author's Response: Kagome's mother, while willing to accept and embrace the relationship between her daughter and Sesshoumaru, is also a miko in this story.  As such, she feels that there are some things that must come first.  The good of all coming before the happiness of a few, for instance.

Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 32

Hehe... Go Noriko! I cannot wait to read more and see how the tourney goes. I was a bit disappointed to not see Sesshoumaru enter, but again, he is still recovering. Noriko, Lady of the Western Lands.... sounds like a plan! ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I've got the last chapter up, and even though I know there will be some people dissapointed by the Tournament not being the focal point, I like how I managed it.

 

As for Noriko, she's got to be my favorite secondary character to date.

Immortal Journey by thehotty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: You're typical Kagome isn't as typical as she seems. She's got a long history. Longer then you could imagine. It doesn't help that her heart cries out in pain all the time. But things get just a bit sticky and she doesn't know what to do. Especially after a weird phone call that sends two of her friends on high alert. What's going on?
Categories: Adult, Angst/ Drama, Action/ Adventure, Romance > Miroku/ Sango, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43395 Read Count: 1822
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2007 Updated: 04 May 2008
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2007 Title: Chapter 5: DON'T GO!

I like this story as it kind of ties some past stuff. I would like to see a little flashback as the past is kind of muddled between the two. However, I do like how this is rolling.

As a note, I am removing all extra excerpts/ omake from fanfics. Please only include a chapter note or end note. No side conversations from the story. It takes away from the story and wastes space. This is something that is in the news archive of this site that I have stated about a month ago. Thanks!

Summary:
A father's hope. A brother's regret. A family's honor.


Inuyasha: A Feudal Fairytale, and all characters herein are the exclusive property of Rumiko Takahashi.

This is my first fan-fiction.

Categories: Adult
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24554 Read Count: 1586
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2007 Updated: 23 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Shame and Chagrin

I think this is a fitting way to write how Naraku died. I would imagine Sesshoumaru could not go unscathed in such a battle. Quite a few good players in the original plot died. Not only does this simplify maintaining how many characters you have to include in dialogue, but you will be able to focus on the plot.

You have done a good job maintaing the personalities of each character. I like the inclusion of Rin in this piece. I also like the side thoughts that Sesshoumaru has made in his analysis of Kagome.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, this is my first attempt at writing anything for other people to read in about 11 years. I have tried very hard to keep the characters canon.

Several of the main players had to go as I am doing this as a continuation of the anime, because I haven't been satisfied with where the manga has taken it, and in order for things to go as I wanted there needed to be a reduction of players, don't worry there will be more action as it progresses.

 ~*Luce*~

Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Even Heroes Fall

The love scene is much more realistic than I have read in a while and for that I have to thank you. It is almost endearing the way they have come together and for once Inu Yasha is not the gruff and crude hanyou.

Author's Response:

I tried to make the reader see that Inuyasha was also a virgin as living the life of a hanyou, as he had, I would assume he would not have had any chances to mate before. I hope the innocence and wonder on both their parts came through well.

~*Luce*~

Summary: A princess finds herself married to a disqusting hanyou Lord. He's also extremely brutal and uncaring. All of a sudden, and a bit to early, her savior comes and things get more intresting. What do they fell for each other?
Categories: Angst/ Drama, Action/ Adventure, Adult, Romance > InuYasha/ Kikyo, Adult > Yaoi, Romance > Miroku/ Sango, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome, Romance > Naraku/ Kagome
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55128 Read Count: 6153
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2007 Updated: 09 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Court Procedes

I remember reading this at A Single Spark. I liked how this plot was AU and started off with the problem at hand. As Admin, I removed the 2 author note chapter. Please only include your author notes in your chapters, even if you have to go back to edit your chapter that was written last to do so.

Author's Response:

Oops, sorry about that.  XD!  Make sure to take care of that as soon as I can.  Once again, sorry!

~TH~ 

Summary:

After years of being ignored, and only being known for the jewel shards; kagome is tired. She wants to bring attention to herself…. There will be very pointless run-in’s with villains ogling at Kagome’s goodies while trying to fight. Everyone is OOC in the COMEDY!! It is a sess/kag paring.


Categories: Adult, General, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3431 Read Count: 867
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2007 Updated: 25 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Shameless Miko

This is simply hilarious. When I first read this fanfic, I did not expect this type of plot. Bravo!

Convince Me by MomoDesu Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: I want to stay, I just need a little convincing.
Categories: Adult, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4468 Read Count: 1427
[Report This] Published: 11 Aug 2007 Updated: 11 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Convince Me

I like this short ditty. It has a pleasant ending that you just want to smile.

It was nice to see a cheating Kouga rather than Inu Yasha being the one to do anything to hurt Kagome's feelings.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

 Yeah, I get tired of stories where Inu is the bad guy in the relationship. He needed a break so Kouga stepped in to be the jerk face.

Walking Away by MomoDesu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: It's hard enough in the fashion industry, but dealing with a man who thinks he's your boyfriend, a man you want to be your boyfriend, AND his boyfriend, life can get complicated.
Categories: Angst/ Drama, Adult, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7674 Read Count: 1412
[Report This] Published: 16 Aug 2007 Updated: 07 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is a nice stage you have set. I am intrigued on how Sesshoumaru had decided he liked men, but then again perhaps he is instead a bi. It would go well to think that. Trust me, I accidentally at a drunk party made out with a gay man. And he was like Jakotsu... he liked breasts. ;)

Author's Response:

I seem to have made a lot of heads turn with this one. What can I say, I like things a little on the strange side :)

Oh, all of my gay friends have infatuations with some part of the female body. My old roomie loved breasts, the bigger the better. Makes me wonder if it was really the sci-fi element that got him watching Ghost In The Shell...

Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Just Because I'm Beautiful Doesn't Mean I've Ever Been Creative

Very naughty, but I do like it! :) I am hoping a car sex scene is next or at least somewhere a flashback of it...lol

Author's Response:

Oh, don't think the car naughtiness is over yet ;)

Flashbacks are a beautiful thing.

bon vivant by yukihime Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: bon vivant bon-vee-VONT, noun: A person with refined and sociable tastes, especially one who enjoys find food and drink. What happens when a sudden turn of events threatens to ruin Sesshoumaru's elegant dinner plans?
Categories: Adult, Angst/ Drama, Romance, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3764 Read Count: 169
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2007 Updated: 17 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

This is a bit different, but a pleasant plot view. I do enjoy a story that involves Sesshoumaru's household and how he runs things, rather than dally in the countryside on patrol.

I am already intrigued...

Summary: A little PWP, written as a thank you to a friend for kicking me in the rear and getting me to write again.

The song "Breathless" is the property of R.J. Lange and Andrea Corr as sung by The Corrs. Sesshomaru is the property of Rumiko Takahashi.
Categories: Adult
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1278 Read Count: 416
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2007 Updated: 18 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Breathless

Ooh! I like this! Very succinct and despite the lack of names, I already know who it is and my imagination just rolls along with the words.

Author's Response: Thank you very much this was my second attempt at a sex scene. It was written as a gift for a friend and also for practice for the next secne I will write for Kyoudai no Meiyo.\r\n\r\nAny and all encouragement or suggestions are welcomed graciously, I need the feedback as I want to write more in the future.\r\n\r\n~*Luce*~\r\n

Happiness by Lupi Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Rin muses over her father's relationship with Inuyasha and finds that it holds happiness. - edited 17/10/07 -

Categories: Romance > Other
Characters: Inu Yasha, Rin, Sesshoumaru
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2763 Read Count: 2328
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2007 Updated: 19 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Happiness

I do not think Kagome should be dipped in anything. Frankly, it is a taboo, but it is a matter of opinion.

Kagome should try to respect the decision and she can voice her opinion, but constantly doing it is rude. On the other hand, what should have been included was Inu Yasha explaining himself to Kagome.

I hope to see something in words to Kagome's acceptance. It is highly odd for Kagome not to be an accepting person considering that she is from (using real timeline and when the anime was originally created), a 21st century girl who knows about this thing goes on. It is nothing new to her. It is a bit OOC for Kagome.

Otherwise, I like the plot. Truthfully, I like even more a I/K/S plot. There was a story I read once on AdultFFnet and it was superb on the relationship between all three.

Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply; I forgot that I hadn't.

I wasn't specifically talking about this fic when I commented on Kagome being dipped in acid. I don't like her in general. She seems completely useless, annoying and childish to me. *shrug* But then, it's a matter of opinion.

I know she was OOC (I was working towards my complete obsession with IC stuff, like I am now), so I redid this. Is she more to your liking now? I can't see her as being absolutely supporting (we're all selfish, she's no different), so she's still in quite a bitter/sad state. And what's nothing new to her? The fact that they're gay or the incest?

You know... Hearing that you like I/K/S even more than this plot, is like a backhanded compliment. It sort of hurts. Sort of. And you already know of my standing with the aforementioned threesome. Glad you like the plot though.

Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it. Hopefully Kagome's slightly more IC now.  

Dubious Relations by Lupi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary: They're sure they hate each other, until a dubious encounter turns their worlds upside down. One because of an ill made mark, the other because he thinks he has problems committing to Kagome.
Categories: General, Angst/ Drama, Adult > Yaoi, Romance > Other
Characters: Inu Yasha, Jaken, Kagome Higurashi, Kagura, Naraku, Sesshoumaru, Sesshoumaru's Mother
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72354 Read Count: 8799
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2007 Updated: 18 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow! Actually double inu wow! This is so good so far. I did expect Inu Yasha to resist for a bit, but it would not matter what the gender, Sesshoumaru is always shagworthy.

Author's Response:

Thank you! And I agree, though Sesshomaru in a woman's kimono has always looked like the most delicious thing in my own mind (the image fights with Peta in lingerie all the time!). Inuyasha didn't stand a chance! It's too bad Sesshomaru's a bastard though...

Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it. ^_^

Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I hope Kagome admits what is going on soon. It would not be good for her to continue on and I hope that Inu and Kag get together as well. I would not mind a three-some (I/K/S), but you already know my wishful thinking on one between the three. I am always hopeful. ;)

I think it is kind of funny how Sesshoumaru is about having a child.

I am enjoying this as it goes and eagerly await the next addition.

Author's Response:

Ooo... I don't want to spoil the story, so forgive me and my vague answers and comments. As the story progresses I'll talk about more things easier, but until then, I'm pretty much turning a blind eye. Sorry. So, no comments about Kagome from me.

I/K/S? I can't stand it, to be honest. I can't see Sesshomaru taking interest in the female species. I can see him thinking of them as weak or a waste of time, unless it is to provide an heir. He has lands to lord over, after all and Naraku to track down. More over than that, I don't think Inuyasha would be willing to share with his 'jack ass' of a brother, let alone share Kagome.

I have to say, it makes me giggle too. Sesshomaru doesn't seem like one to have a kid; he's so solemnn and not-fun. Not boring, mind you, he's just... Not lovable in the way babies would like. He's just going to have to get used to it, I suppose. Unless he really does kill off D. I've already grown fond of the bub though! *clings to Sesshomaru's stomach*

I'm very glad to hear that. The next chapter will be up by the end of the week. I think I've already said it, but I have 14 chapters done already so updating will be faster until I have to write them between updates. Then we get to wait 2 weeks between updates. (Yay.)

Thanks for reviewing; I appreciate it! ^_^ I hope yo uenjoy the rest of the story as well. 

Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well, I am curious how this will keep going now that it has been revealed to Naraku that Sesshoumaru has a mate.

I also hope Sesshoumaru and Kagome become more amiable.

Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that; it shows that I'm drawing people in, even if it is a little bit. So thank you for letting me know.

As for Sesshomaru and Kagome... Well, let's not go there. It'll ruin the rest of the story.Sorry, m'dear.

Thank you for taking the time to review! :)

- Lupi 

Summary: Feature

Chapter 1 Excerpt: It had started out so innocently. The chain of events that led her from the past to the now had all started with simple, innocent desire...

Fanfiction feature


Categories: Angst/ Drama, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109368 Read Count: 4279
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2007 Updated: 26 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2007 Title: Chapter 1: See the Constellation

I remember the first time I read this and remember thinking this piece was perfectly written as I could feel the mood. The description is amazing. I am really happy to see this posted here on IYFF and thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Summary: Feature

The shard hunting group is rocked by an unexpected request from Sesshomaru and forced to endure the deal when, by mistake, Kagome agrees to his offer.

Fanfiction feature


Categories: Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi, Kikyo, Miroku, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshoumaru, Sesshoumaru's Mother, Shippo
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2984 Read Count: 12434
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2007 Updated: 26 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2009 Title: Unexpected Endeavors

Thank you for coming by and updating your story. I have loved this story for a long time. :)

Always by PitaBread Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: [Kouga/Kagome] Kagome, fed up with InuYasha's inability to choose between Kikyou and herself, goes back to her time. After a week, and InuYasha doesn't come, she goes back to the feudal era and finds none other than Kouga waiting for her - and he needs her help again!
Categories: Angst/ Drama, Action/ Adventure, Romance, Adult, Romance > Kouga/ Kagome
Characters: Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi, Kagome's Mom, Kirara, Kouga, Miroku, Sango, Shippo, Souta Higurashi
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44082 Read Count: 47581
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2007 Updated: 31 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really like how you have the characters well written. I am usually a SessKag fan, but there is always something wonderful about a Kag/Koga story.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm a Sessh/Kag fan too, and I'm working on a story for them, but I've always had a soft spot for Kouga, and for ONCE I wanted him to have his heyday, LOL.

 Thanks again, it means a lot!!!

Summary:

[AU] Kagome lives a happy life - but she's looking for more in the love department. Hoping for something better, will she get more than she bargained for? {Kagome x ???}


Categories: Angst/ Drama, Romance, Adult
Characters: Hojo, Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi, Kagura, Kikyo, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Rin, Sango, Sesshoumaru, Souta Higurashi
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163657 Read Count: 8226
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2007 Updated: 14 Feb 2009
Reviewer: Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2007 Title: Chapter 2: A Proposal

You know, I think with all these guys, I still would like it to be SessKag. *begs dearly* I laughed hard about her answering the door with no pants on and Sesshoumaru kept looking down....HAHAHA!

Author's Response: LOL  Well, I thought that their meeting was kind of bland, so I needed something to spice it up!  HAHA...  I'm a big SessKag fan too - you'll like my forth chapter *snicker* - but I'm not giving anything away!  Thanks for the review!