Penname: Keva [Contact] Real name: Ronnie
Member Since: 31 Aug 2007
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:

I'll be slowly moving all my fics over starting from A and working my way on down. Some will be updated and some will be new but they'll all be here before you know it.


Disclaimer: All OC's in my fics are MINE especially Kei! So keep your grubby little mits off my kitty or I may have to maim you up real good!

And for a little treat; SugarOo did a rendering of Kei for me. You can find it on her da account or on mine just do a search for her name click on mine account name and it'll take you stright to it.

 


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It's Just Pretend by KogasWoman Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Kagome and Inuyasha have a huge fight before she goes home, when she comes back and sees Sesshomaru. That's when the perfect plan to get back at Inuyasha strikes Kagome. Sesshomaru agrees to do it with one simple rule. Possible Lemons in the future.  (UNDER RECONSTRUCTION)
Categories: General, Romance, Adult, Romance > Miroku/ Sango, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome
Characters: Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi, Kikyo, Miroku, Rin, Sango, Sesshoumaru, Shippo, Souta Higurashi
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7256 Read Count: 3501
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2008 Updated: 27 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a good story with a really good premise. I like it.

Just one suggestion, and I have seen this way too many times and it drives me insane.

When you write Sessy, and as much as we all love it when he does this please please please I beg you, don't make him refer to his self in the third person everythime he speaks about his self. It takes away from the story and makes it hard to read.

 I really hope you don't take this as a flame for that is not my intention. You have a good writing ability and I just want to help.

Can't wait to see where you go with this, I have been snagged into the web of curiosity.  Much love. Keva



Author's Response: Thank you! As I said any tips I can get to make a good story I will welcome!

Summary: Post Naraku: Kagome's life is not what she would like it to be. Sesshoumaru finds a broken miko, who literally falls into his lap. **UPDATED - CHAPTER 15*
Categories: Adult, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome
Characters: Kagome Higurashi
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35266 Read Count: 9823
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2008 Updated: 29 Dec 2008
Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 27 May 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ys know I remember reading this way back when on single spark and then one day it just kind of disappeared; and I said 'dang it another one I like is gone or not being finished'. Then I thought well maybe she's just really busy and doesn't have the time.

Well I'm glad to see it's back and I just have to say that Kagome is such a naughty girl.

Keva

  



Author's Response: thanks Keva! I try my best to entice people. There are some ups and downs with the story, so I hope you keep reading.

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ha you are as bad as I am at letting things linger and linger and linger until everyone is all pissy cause you haven't updated in awhile.

It's nice to finally have you back as it's taken a year to read this story:) don't disappoint me with a cheeseball ending when you finally get it done. I don't have the energy to deal with cheese it's much too tireing to deal with.

Much love. Keva

P.S. What are we short on the server?



Author's Response: $90 has been collected. I can throw in $50 myself as it is really tight at the moment. I resorted to doing pay per post like stuff on my personal site, but those only give so much and take time to do....and above all, pay out 30 days after blog post is done. Right now as I see according to the above, about $79 from server pay. It is due on January 3rd by midnight, so we have a few days still. It is tough for others being that it is the holidays.\r\n\r\n-------\r\nAs for the fanfic, I plotted this fanfic already and it better not be cheesy when I get done either...lol. So far I have not strayed and there is (hint hint) within a chapter or two a wrench thrown into the shebang.

Summary: Why corrupt the Shikon Jewel one piece at a time when you can just corrupt the one who could purify all that beautiful evil and be done with it? Why lust after a dead priestess when you can have a live one?
Categories: Romance, Adult, Adult > Fetish, Romance > Naraku/ Kagome
Characters: Kagome Higurashi, Naraku
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54946 Read Count: 23176
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2008 Updated: 20 Jan 2009
Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Out of Body

Awww... he's going to keep her. He would be sad if he didn't. Although he would deny it with his entire being. Bastard!

Killing Inu emotionally; very nice. That dumb dog gets everything he deserves and then some. But there's one thing I'm not understanding and perhaps you can help me with this. How the heck did Miroku become unconscious? And where was Shippou? And why didn't her family cross her mind when she saw the tree? And does Inu know his beloved dead thing is… um… well dead?

I want to know why dang it! See this is why I don't like reading stories until they are complete. I hate to wait… it sucks ass. Oh well I guess I will have to be a good girl and wait. So hurry the heck up! Much love. Keva

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Discipline

Okay now I very rarely ever review a story but after the one you gave me I was more than a little compelled to read your Naraku stories and I have to say thus far I LOVE THEM! You are doing an amazing job of portraying the wicked one. Kudos to you. Whoot! Whoot!

 

I will finish reading this later as I have a few errands to run. Can't wait to continue on this perverse journey. I'm such a hentai... Don't tell anyone I said that. Much love. Keva

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Discipline

Oh and one other thing. This story reminds me of the song S.O.S by Apocalyptica. You should hear that song; very cool and soooo this story.

Author's Response: Actually I worte this one to Kronos Quartet's Sigur Ros cover - "Flugufrelsarinn". I sniffed out Apocalyptica - you're right; they are very good. Good choice.

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Deep

Okay so I finally caught up reading this story and all I can think is; I wouldn't mind being a slave to the dark bastard. I just love him. He's so dark and evil and fun to torture and a heck of a lot easier to write. (Much more personality than the ice prince)

Once again good job and look forward to your next bout of  inspiration. Muich love. Keva

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Silk

EEEEEWWWWWWWW!! Much to much blood for my tastes.

 

Sticky, slippery, and hot bodies rolling around with each other; I believe they need a bloody water hot spring soak.

 

Oh and one more thing. I find myself doing this all the time and constanly fixing one stupid letter; but your at and as-es. You have weird turn around on those.

 

I'm sure it's just a typo but I thought I would point it out to you as you are an awesome writer. Then again I can understand that after writing 5k something words they all look to be spelled correctly. I call it the alphabet acid trip; they look right until you really look at it then you realize that it isn't.

 

Oh well; I'll shut up now as I seem to be off on some stupid rambling tangent. This is probably why I don't review very much; I never know when to quit. Thanks for the Circling Fates review by the way; it was greately appreciated. Although not many are reading it becasue it's ins't some hentai story with tons of sex. Gawd we live in a world of pervs. Miroku would be proud.

 

Gah I'm doing it again. Okay I'm going to shut up now and let you get on with your life instead of listening to my wandering thoughts. Much love Keva.



Author's Response:

OMG! Alphabet acid trip! Congrats - you win the "funniest shit of my week" award! That's exactly the correct description of that evil brain fog that settles in after about 2 hours and a few thousand words.

As to the strange sentence structure, I think it might have something to do with the way I talk. It tends to be quite circular; thoughts winding around, sometimes chasing each other in circles. That's one of the many reasons I'm not a teacher - or a professional writer. Thanks for bringing it to my attention - I am going to do one holy-hell of an edit once this monster is done.

 I'm one of those many pervs, but I do have literary interests other than sex. Good fiction is good fiction, regardless of content. So worry not - you'll always have my eyes glued to your many pages :) Thanks for the love! Love is always good.

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Haunted

Oh how kawaii!! He liiiiiikes her. Although his stubborn black heart would never admit it. Jerk!

And she is realizing what a little hentai she is. The bad girl hidden deep insdie the good girl.

So I wonder will she become even more dark and naughty now that she has her stolen piece of soul back? It seems like she would as Kikyo was mean mean mean mean and rather self serving.

I wonder though; will Kags have one more flare up of definace against her new dark side? It seems like she would if she is analyzing her position as a slave to the dark one. Ya know the final calsh between the good and evil within her; the ultimate battle that finally pushes her over the edge?

I guess I will have to wait and see. I hate to wait; especially since I'm stuck at home being sicker than a dog. I have nothing better to do.

For crying out loud! See this is why I don't like giving reviews. I go off on these stupid little tangents for no rhyme or reason and I'm more than certain that no one cares but yet I continue to do it anyway.

That's it! Shut up Keva and just tell her she did a good job and end it already!

You did an awesome job and can't wait for more. Much love. Keva



Author's Response:

Being taunted like 7 year old on the playground about my cuteness made me smile so WIDE! You cheer me up, woman! :)

 You may natter on and on in any of my story's reviews that you want - I like it!

Please feel better soon - gotta love the Snot-Rhino! :) Thanks for reading and I'm really enjoying "Copping a Feel" - Tell Kagome I'll whip Naraku if her arm's getting sore...it'd be my wicked pleasure...hehe.

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Secrets

HA! That is so A-typical of Naraky baby to set her up. He's such a bastard; but that is why we love him so. All dark, methodical, scheming, and domineering... If he were real we would all be in some serious serious trouble. Unless we bowed down and promised complete obeidence to him. I could do that.

Ys know I was thinkin that Naraky-poo needs a piercing as well just for the sake of tit for tat. It would so be fitting and rather hot because your story is just soooooooooo naughty. I'm suprised that you have more naughty things for them to do.

I do have one question however; what the heck are the other players in the story doing all this time? Shouldn't her friends (Inu not necessairly included) be wonder where the heck she is or at least her family?

Why am I posing these questions to you? You know what you're doing and where you are going with this. I just hope he doesn't end up killing her because that will make me sad and I just know he will miss her but would never admit it.

Oh for craps sake! It's never ending with me is it? I should just write a story for you of my review so you can read that instead.

Alright that's it I'm sooo done. I promise. Not another word from me. Good chapter and can't wait for more naughty abuse. (Okay no more words but those.) Much love. Keva

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Behind

Yea he'll make her scream like the naughty girl she is. Or maybe she'll make him scream; it'd serve him right

Spanking Naraku...

Mmm... Mmm... Mmmmm... Nummy nummy!

 


 

Here is how I see him in my mind if it will help at all. Imagine him all smoldering, dark, broody, domineering, built like a brick wall, and just all around sexy. Yeah Naraky baby!

If you have ever seen Zyephen's rendering of him you would see mostly what I see when I imagine him; just not as feminine? Maybe a little more masculine. Here is the link if you want to check it out.

http://www.paperdemon.com/art/view/12643

I have to thank PitaBread for the link; it's her friend that did the drawing.

 


Ya know I'm glad there's someone else out there who shares the same passion for the dark one I do. I don't feel soo alone anymore nor am I as ostracized as I was when I first started writing stories about him oh so long ago.

I actually had to pull all my earily works on him due to the immense amount of hate reviews I was receiving and just settled with Sessy because everyone loves him.(Insert sarcasm here.)

Just because Naraku is evil it doesn't mean he ain't sexy and I think I'm getting the word out. I'm on a one woman mission to bring him to the top. I refuse to be silenced!

Okay I'm getting way off line here. Thanks for your reviews and am still lovin your story. Can't wait to see what happens next with your story. Much love. Keva

 

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 26: Realization

Uh-Oh... Bum... Bum... Bummm... Poor Inu he gets no love. I feel sorry for him... No I don't. I'm just not a real big fan of the inuhanyou. Oh well; he gets what he deserves for playing with nasty dead things.

I really hope she doesn't go all soft like many make her do when it comes to Inu. Sympethetic yes... a big ol' softie... no way.

Kami I just love the dark bastard and can't wait to see what he has in store for her next. Good job. Much love. Keva

(Oooh a short one today. Wow I must be tired.)

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 28: Dreams

Oooh... Wicked little bitch! I love it. Give him a taste of his own medicine; he needs that sometimes to remind him he can't always control everything; external forces will always work against him.

And nice dream sequence. I'm sure that that's what he would dream were he real. Very awesome.

Whelp get better soon being sick sucks ass but it also gives you a lot of free time and the meds give you some crazy ideas. I have a story out there in fanfiction land that when I came down off of medication I was wondering what the hell was I thinking but everyone loved it so much I left it out there. Sickos seriously....

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Giving Orders

Gah! I want to read it really I do but sapcing... spacing... it's like a big ol' blob of words. It's making me dizzy.

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Life and Death

Loves her?! Is that even the right word to use to describe how he feels? I'm thinking more along the lines of controling. No one can control her like he can. But then again this IS naraku  we ar talking about here so his sick and twisted version of love would be that way.

Very nice and very sad chapter; although I really wasn't all that torn up about the character deaths. It's not to say I don't like them but meh they serve a purpose when they are needed. I actually wished it was Inu dying. For some reason I can't quite put my finger on I do not like him at all. Oh well I guess he is good for tormenting.

Good chapter and can't wait for the next one. Much love. Keva

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Flame

Sorry it has taken me so long to get to this but that's what being in the hospital does to someone; they miss shit.

Anyways now lets see here. I hope he punishes her real good as she was a naughty girl. Then again it was essentially him that made her cum as it was him she was imagining so he couldn't be all that mad... could he? Yet this is Naraku we're talking about so who knows.

Okay now for your chastisement! Must you make us wait so long for an update? I mean really you were on a roll then… nothing for a few weeks. For shame. Naraku is going to punish you real good; although you might like it. (giggles) Better yet; no Naraku for you for one whole week and if you back sass we will go for two weeks. Is that what you want?! Is it?

Have a good weekend. Much love Keva

 

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Bound

He thinks he's going to kill her... bah what a baka. Truly what would he have really once he becomes complete and destroys everything? Nothing and he knows it. Boys are so dumb sometimes.

 

Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Set Free

I just have one word for Naraku... Idiot! Oh he got his wish on both ends of the spectrum but it cost him. What a doofus. I wonder does he know that he is trapped inside the jewel or is it like that MIB II thing with the locker? Now that would be funny... giggles.

Or is it one of those constant repeat things where they keep doing it over and over again? She has no memory of her 'dream' or does she?

Does this mean they took the place of Midoriko and Magatsuhi in the jewel just waiting for some dumb ass to find the jewel and start thr whole Inuyasha thing all over again?

GAH! I hate open ended stories creates too much wondering and who has time for all of that??? And yet I am guilty of doing the same thing.

Oh well... Awesome story and I can't wait to see what other troubles you can create for our favorite duo. Much love. Keva

Summary: Totosai was only going for a walk; Kaede was only falling out of tree...it could be love. They weren't always old codgers, you know! Written for the 36iyeroticfairytales site on LJ as part of a Valentine's Challenge.
Categories: Romance > Other, Humor, Romance
Characters: Totosai
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7102 Read Count: 180
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2009 Updated: 06 Feb 2009
Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Exchange

Adorable... Ahh the elderly they too were young once upon a time ago. Oh please let this be a story of two old people reminiscing about days long past with scenes of their not so young memories battling it out over who is lying and who isn't and the pale palor's of those who are hearing of their love trysts from so long ago. Funny shit! Much love. Keva

Summary:

Dinner was good, but the movie was better...

A polyamormy story featuring inuYasha, Kagome, Naraku and Kikyou. WARNING: explicit.


Categories: Adult, Adult > Fetish
Characters: Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi, Kikyo, Naraku
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5549 Read Count: 1252
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2009 Updated: 30 May 2009
Reviewer: Keva Signed
Date: 30 May 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're soooo naughty... I love it! Glad to see you back as well.

Author's Response: Thanks! I posted this here because I knew you'd love it :)