What happens when a accedent occures when inuyasha's beads brake? kagome brings something from her time that might just tame him. What could it be? READ TO FIND OUT!!
what the hell was that it didn't say crap it only said what she was going to do and what she bought put more effort in it that is what a story is about god i can't believe you only did THAT
that was a nice scroll like letter thing and it was an awesome story
Inuyasha, Sango And Kouga have gotten the wrong ideal about what Kagome is doing to Miroku (not that Miroku would minds) and all kind of horror and misunderstanding is unleashed.
that did sound a little perverted scratch the little and put in the word a lot
awwwwwwwwwww is all i have to say and one more thing, i think that naraku should really go to hell well his name does mean hell in japanese so that is where he will go!!! :(
When Kagome comes back from her time to share with her friends what Christmas is about, she brings presents for each of them...and a special one for Inuyasha... will they tell each other how they really feel???
that was so sweet i can't stand it
awwwwwwwwwwwww it's about time that he finally didn't get scared from his feelings
haha that was funny and i like what the lesson he said at the end
well that was interseting and i think that you did a pretty good job on the story. :)
A misunderstanding leads to a confession.This was written for Inuyasha Captions (http://community.livejournal.com/iycaptions/) Week One image.
that was a touching story it was great
inuyasha and miruko play truth or dare.
that was really short you nshould really say what happened next like what inuyasha then did and what kagome was thinking and what miroku thought
aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet but the bad part is it took a spell for him to figure it out :)
that was so sweet but i couldn't believe that it said kanna died in it though it is possible :)
this story is great and it is sweet too but you could have told how the others were when they told sango miroku shippo kirara and kaede
Author's Response: Are you familiar with the manga because this oneshot was based heavily on it, along with the prompts required for the contest. What you want wouldn't have been appropriate.
It has been four years since Naraku's defeat, and the Sacred Jewel is almost complete. Kagome's been gone ever since Naraku's demise, and Inuyasha has not talked to a soal since. He has left to find jewel shards on his own, leaving the married couple of Miroku and Sango to raise their children. Then one fatefull day Kagome travels back down the well. Reunions, romance, love and hate, what will happen? (please r&r!)
you need to write more chapters about what the snake did and inuyasha and even kagome finally finding inuyasha at least i would
"...he did it again, he fucking did it again. ‘Why do I keep doing this to myself? Will I ever learn?’ She looked over at the ring on her finger, took it off and threw it across the bar." Inu/Kag I don't own Inuyasha. Ratings my change for later chapters.
eh it was ight could be better
Author's Response: Well I did say I was out of my "zone"...
Naraku's dead, Miroku and Sango are married.. that leaves InuYasha and Kagome!They still haven't confessed their feelings yet. Will the appearance of a strange youkai change their lives forever?
oh my kimi (kimi means god) i think you could have done a lot better with this story i really like but it ended at like a good part and it was more like a summary i think you should've made it longer then a lot more would totally be interested in the story
Inuyasha finally finds the courage to confront the only person that can hold him back.
Inuyasha belongs to Rumkio Takahashi. Not me.
Outa My Face belongs to Saving Abel.
that was so cute and sweet i wish in the real show series they would say that and finally get it over with. :)
awwwwww this is areally good story
that was so cute and sorry for saying stuff about the other story without reading what you wrote on it :(
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked this one.
No problem - but you should always read the author's notes because it may tell you exactly why the story is the way it is, and then you won't be disappointed when it's not something else.
that was sad and really painful to read but it was a good story
well that was a sweet story
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! ^^
i like this story but, it could be a little longer jeez
Author's Response: It was written as a kiriban in response to the prompt by the person who won it. Drabbles or oneshots are given for this, and that is what this was. It fulfilled the prompt and there was no reason for it to be longer - it told the story that it needed to.
