Reviewer: 1carinoinu Signed
12 Dec 2010
Chapter 68: Sorrow
I've finally had the chance to read your story. While I can't stand the format on this site and you are limited to what can be posted to ff.net, I'm stuck here.
I'm sorry you had problems with Dokuga. At least there, you can post what you want with the relevant warnings at the beginning of the chapters, and it's easier on the eyes. I don't want to delve into those issues, so I'll move along.
This story is really rather good. Unfortunately, I most likely have lost a good portion of the plot as I skipped through the majority of the story lines relating to Vishous and his cohorts, but without having read all of it, the story stands pretty well on its own. I just go to what's happening with Kagura, Kagome and Sesshomaru. Now, that's my own opinion and no way reflects on your story. I just have a bit of a short attention span.
I don't know if you have someone proof-reading, as there are some word miss-use and spelling errors that can tend to detract from this rather incredible story.
All in all, you've got a real talent for developing a story. Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Hey, its all good. I am guilty of doing the same things when reading books or fanfics, that's just the way it is. Everyone has different tastes. As for the proof reading, well I've been trying for the longest to get that sorted out. I've had about three different betas that can't seem to weed out ALL of the errors, and quite a few that are adding errors, such as changing a word that is correct with on that is incorrect and replacing all of the words with the incorrect one. I've got another beta that will comb through every chapter and hopefully fix the mistakes. But I'm so glad that you still like the story.