Penname: Raven_Clover [Contact] Real name: Lydia
Member Since: 05 Aug 2007
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37. Miami, FL. anime fan.


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Summary: Kagome has three days until a curse takes away her eyesight. What will she do? *Chapter 6 finally up*
Categories: General, Adult
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16091 Read Count: 2820
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2007 Updated: 21 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Raven_Clover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is very unique. I read a story once where Kagome became blind, but this is totally different and I can't wait to see what else goes.

To Lucifer_Spades: The use of 'remedied' was used properly. As in 'to fix', which is one of the meanings of the word.

The other error, I agree with.

Please update soon Nile!

Summary: Haiku (urban haiku) on Kagome's unrequited love.
Categories: Poetry, Angst/ Drama
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 149 Read Count: 1106
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2007 Updated: 19 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Raven_Clover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: She Will Be Numb

This is great! I remember that other one "The Last Haiku of Kagome". This is just as good. It is so sad. It reminds me of all the scenes InuYasha leaves to see Kikyo.

Happiness by Lupi Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Rin muses over her father's relationship with Inuyasha and finds that it holds happiness. - edited 17/10/07 -

Categories: Romance > Other
Characters: Inu Yasha, Rin, Sesshoumaru
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2763 Read Count: 2263
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2007 Updated: 19 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Raven_Clover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Happiness

There's a lot of appeal to the inu brothers being together. I like this and the other fanfic you wrote based on the same duo. I do, as Nile does have a special fetish for a threesome between the inus and Kagome.

Kagome does seem off character. I would've thought Sango a bit more for the role than Kagome for being against Sess and InuYasha being together.

I like how this is written more from Rin's opinion because in this instance, it really does matter what she thinks about the whole matter.

Good write!



Author's Response:

Hi, sorry for taking so long to reply; school's been taking over my head and I forgot about this. ^^; Many apologies...

I'm very much a Kagome hater (though, I've made a vow to -not- bash her character), and that threesome makes absolutely no sense to me; Sesshomaru's not one to share, and the same can be said for Inuyasha (look at how he treats Kouga). So I don't consider the threesome at all. I suppose there is a way for it to happen, but it's completely lost on me.

I've attempted to improve on this (alas, it was created when I was still getting into ICness), so hopefully both Sesshomaru and Kagome are more in character now. If you want and should you have the time, could you read it again and let me know how I went?

Rin's forever fascinating me; she's untouched by the evils in the world. Or perhaps it's better to say that her heart's pure; her parents being killed couldn't count as being good. I like how pure and innocent she is, and I agree, her opinion matters a lot on the matter. Sesshomaru's denial just makes it all so much better though. *giggles* She doesn't even realise why he does it.

Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it. ^_^ And again, I apologise for the late reply.

- Lupi 

Dubious Relations by Lupi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 57]
Summary: They're sure they hate each other, until a dubious encounter turns their worlds upside down. One because of an ill made mark, the other because he thinks he has problems committing to Kagome.
Categories: General, Angst/ Drama, Adult > Yaoi, Romance > Other
Characters: Inu Yasha, Jaken, Kagome Higurashi, Kagura, Naraku, Sesshoumaru, Sesshoumaru's Mother
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72354 Read Count: 8679
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2007 Updated: 18 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven_Clover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

InuYasha isn't seeming to have a good time. Poor Kags. At least that is the usual thing that happens; her getting kidnapped.

I hope InuYasha makes it out okay. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

He doesn't, does he? Ah well... At least he's half demon, he'd have died a long time ago, otherwise.

The next chapter is up. *peace*

Thank you for reviewing!  

Summary:

 It was all a bet among his friends and his own girlfriend. Nakaguwa Sesshoumaru agreed to seduce Higurashi Kagome, best friend to his despised half-brother InuYasha, in an attempt to right wrongs and humiliate the pair in front of the whole school. Only he did not forsee he becoming the seductee instead of the seductioner.

Warning: Adult themes (violence, language, sexual scenes)


Categories: Humor, Angst/ Drama, Romance, Adult, Romance > InuYasha/ Kagome, Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagome
Characters: Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi, Kagura, Miroku, Rin, Sango, Sesshoumaru
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13857 Read Count: 2151
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2008 Updated: 09 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Raven_Clover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The rivalry is splendid. Way to set the pace of the plot and scene. I think Kagura is very pathetic hanging on Sesshoumaru. He really doen't care for her nor anything. Perfectly in character

Reviewer: Raven_Clover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm like Kagome. Surprisingly I have sushi Fridays with my gal pals here in Miami. I'm sure its not like going somewhere in Japan, which I'd like to go one day.

All of the inu group has a good sense of foreboding. With their rivalry with the other group led by Sess, it is no wonder.

Reviewer: Raven_Clover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'd have to agree. Spanish is my first language. English was difficult growing up. I know it probably was easier than japanese due to the commonality in latin roots of a lot of words.

Please do continue. I am itching to read more. Your story is in such great depth in description that I'm impressed. I've already favorited this story.

Summary:

What would you do if you suddenly found yourself in one of your wickedest dreams? What, you're awake? Pinch yourself again! Dark fic. AU with canon flavor.


Categories: Adult > Fetish, Adult
Characters: Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3369 Read Count: 2113
[Report This] Published: 10 Nov 2008 Updated: 10 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Raven_Clover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1

Oh my, this is making me fan myself! Very hot!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hurrah for smut!

Reviewer: Raven_Clover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Was it Inu that bound her? Sorry, I seemed t have missed that. I got too caught up in the delirium. :)



Author's Response: No - InuYasha stumbles upon Kagome in a place he never thought he would. It seems she'd gotten on the wrong side of the slave trade before finding the safety of the well - unlucky little miko! If I'd stumbled into the person I desired in such a... captive...position, I think I'd have to take advantage of my good fortune too!  I'm very glad you enjoyed! Thank you for your kind review; it makes my day!