Sesshoumaru wanted more than a mate. He wanted her, Kagome.
Surrounded by those that would stand between them, they will take on the prejudices of the modern world while forging an unbreakable bond in the fires of his Hallowed Desire.
This was a really good story. It didn't end the way I expected it to, but that's okay. I loved your take on Sesshoumaru's mother. Noriko was a great character.
It was very interesting seeing Sesshoumaru's father being portrayed as the bad guy. It is something I have never read before, but I welcome things that are different.
As always excellent writting and character portrayal! Great job!
This was really, really good! And your lemon was sinfully delicious!!! Great job!!
After reading a poetry scroll amongst the relics once belonging to Inuyasha's mother, Kagome traps herself and Sesshoumaru in another world, where they must journey through seven, different fairy tales and complete the poem if they wish to return home.
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!! I hope he tells her about the Oto-hime and the box!! I'm not sure of the significance of it all, but I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Drabble. Silent Tears
Very well written. Very sad though. :
Tee, heeeeee!!!! This was pretty sweet! Just the right amount of sweetness, and naughty, naughty, citrus! Hooray for citrus!
Good job!
Romance, sadness, drama, excitement...it's all here, in this alternate ending to the Inuyasha manga.
This takes place after the end of the manga…sort of. The thing is, I didn’t much care for the end of the manga. It wasn’t he ending I had hoped it would be. So, as I writer and an Inuyasha fan, I have decided to take matters into my own hands. This is my own alternate ending. It begins immediately after Naraku is defeated.
The actual ending of the manga wasn't what I thought it should be. It was lacking in emotion, completeness, and too many words were left unsaid. Not to mention too many things left undone. This alternative ending hopes to do for me, and others, what the original did not.
This was a very interesting and emotional chapter. I thought it was well written and really believable. Good job. I will go on to the next chapter as soon as I get a chance!
I'm working on one of my stories right now, and I thought I'd take a short break. ^_^
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thank you for reading! Best of luck with your story!
yEy again!!!! I loved the ending!!! I so warm and fuzzy inside now!!! yEy!!!!
yEy!!!!! *claps excitedly* I loved the "sit" part! That was great!!! Nice story! I was very entertained!
Darn it! *sniffles* you make me cry!!! I hope you have a good plan in mind to fix all this! And I hope you aren't planning to keep Inuyasha human. I like him as a half demon. Oh well, I guess I'll have to read to find out.
Screeeeeeeeech!!!!! AGAIN??!!!!
First of all, you tore off Inuyasha's ears again???!!! DAMNIT!!!!
Second, and more importantly, you'd better not kill Kagome!!! At least not permanately!!! Whew that was a pretty intense chapter!
OMG! I am wishing that this is was nightmare, but I fear that it is not. Ugh! that was hard to read! I hope things turn out okay for him!
Can't wait to see what if anything Sesshoumaru can do to help!
I'm really curious as to what happened to poor Inuyasha! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
And you're rigth, Sesshoumaru is a difficult character to work with. I have written a few stories where he was at least one of the main characters, and I know personally how difficult it can be. He's soooo uncooperative!
I think you did a good job keeping him in character.
Screeeeeeeeech!!! *flails arms uncontrollably* What the heck did he do???!!!! Very nice dramatic twist! Off to the next chapter I go!
yEy!!!! Flufff!!! Iliked this chapter!
Well, I thought the lemon could have been more detailed. I am a lover of citrus! I like to write them myself! And even though I often find it a bit difficult to write lemons, I do try to make them a bit more detailed, so as to suck the reader into the moment. It wasn't bad, just kinda short.
Interesting stuff. There's just one thing. In a few places you have used the word "than" when it should have been "then." It is a rather common mistake to confuse the two, and I know that the story is already finished. I just wanted to point that out for future knowledge. Off I go to the next chapter.
Hmmm, I am intrigued to see where you are going with this. Off I go to the next chapter!
*points finger at author* I'm warning you Dark_Author! I don't know what you're doing here but I don't think I like it!
I'm hoping for a happy ending! Off to the next chapter!
*licks tongue childishly* Your little cliffhanger has no effect on ME!!! Muhahahahaha! The next chapter is already posted! Hahahahaha! Off I go!
Oh, and by the way, I have been enjoying the story so far. And I have a short attention span! XD
*Points finger accusingly* You better not have killed Inuyasha!!!!! *Wraps fingers around author's neck* Now bring him back, darn it!!! I'll find out where you live and smite you good if you don't!
And that dream was terribly mean! My heart skipped a beat when she said he wasnn't breathing!
Whew! Now I'm off to the next chapter, hopefully to find out that Inuyasha is alive.
~Gulp~ *Cringes in fear from Lady Sianna*
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
