[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2012 12:04:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story. I am a very 'overly-emotional' reader, so I cried a few times over the duration of when I read this. But I believe if you can't cause emotions to stir for the reader when writing a story like this then there's no point. It is very good. I hope you move on to write even more and I hope to read more of your stories soon.
Date: 17 Jul 2011 2:28:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
> _> *strokes nakku-pi's * I still wuv you *kisses his cheek* :d wonderful story !!!!!! :D I enjoyed it fullly :D
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2009 2:10:49 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am so glad that I paid some attention to my email when someone asked about your story. I had the pleasure of reading your story! The one thing I regret is not being able to read it when it was going through its creation stages by you. You know, chapt. by chapt. I really love the OOc of Sesshomaru because if I had to write him in a story, it would be mostly OOc. I love the way you made Kagome a woman of strength. Making Souta the elder Bro was wonderful. I adore the way you made every angst situation full of emotion that at some point it had me in tears Especially Sango's demise. I love it when authors make me cry. Understand, I'm not at all gloomy, I just like to feel or get into your characters. The way you told this story, in my opinion captured the beautiful everyday life of this reservation that will always be remembered by me because you made me feel like I was there. Truly I enjoyed this story and I'm looking forward to reading more of you works. Peace!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2009 10:30:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
great story it was said what happened to Sango and Kikyo though but the whole story was spell binding thanks for writing
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2009 6:54:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
It is unfortunate for Kikyo. Although I hated her, the explanation of her past totally cleared up any animosity.
Is Kagome and the baby going to make it?
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2009 4:39:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
Another one on the way! Kawaii! Sesshoumaru sister is a bitch, but I am glad his mother smoothed things out.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2009 2:20:39 AM Title: Chapter 28
Naraku is in for a world of hurt woot woot
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2009 2:50:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Naraku you ass hole!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2009 6:20:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
Beautiful and I love how Sesshoumaru cornered her. Sexy as hell!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2009 3:01:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
woot woot heir are together! now for the strange occurances is it naraku trying to get revenge???
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2009 7:14:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
Very true, she did not tell him, but she did not correct his thoughts.
I wonder how she will react to finding out who was behind the 'business partner' situation.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2009 10:57:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
Clever Kagome... making Sesshoumaru think Souta is her husband...lol
Author's Response: Well, she never deliberately led him to believe that Souta was her husband. That is all him jumping to conclusions.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2009 10:49:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
Very mysterious...dead animals being left about the place.
The truth always comes out... and drunk bragging people are great ways to find out the truth. lol.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2009 10:41:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Very raw scene... at least she was not totally alone and there were people to help.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2009 10:35:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
It is sad that both are unable to contact each other.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2009 10:21:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
Very heartbreaking, but the lemon was definitely beautiful. It makes the parting that much harder to do.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2009 10:11:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Very sweet of him. This side of Sesshoumaru is just really great. Kagome always does assume the worst. She really needs to stop beating herself up.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2009 10:07:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Kagome always gets in trouble, but not intentionally. I think that even though she has a different cultural background, her core character is very much her.
I love this. You could almost insert different characters and pass it as a novel, seriously.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2009 9:54:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Unfortunate that Naraku is still a bastard of a character. However, you have played him to be far more dirty that in the anime... kind of suits him more...lol
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2009 9:32:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
sighs and still she hasn't told him she isn't married grrrrrr
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2009 5:36:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh boy Ses thinks she is married to Souta ! ugh why didn't she tell him he is her brother? poor Ses she doesn't even know the reason he wasn't there was because he was in prison he should tell her or Miroku should well hell somebody should!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2009 1:20:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Not a bad chapter. I think that the bond has begun. I can't wait to see what happens next. Where will they meet? How will they find each other again? I guess I should get to reading so I can answer those questions. lol. -Cat-
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2009 1:09:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
The bikers dont bite but Kagome sure does. She is such a spitfire. Lol. I like her in this story. I can't wait to see what she does next. -Cat-
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2009 1:08:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
That's sad that Roses husband died. I am glad she coulde have Kagome and Sango there to help her cuz its just like them to do that. Keep up the good work. -Cat-
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2009 1:06:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning to an interesting story. I think this will be fin to read and see how it turns out. -Cat-