Date: 17 Jul 2011 7:06:58 AM Title: Chapter 41
OMG... this had to be one of the most intriguing stories i've ever read lol'
i was so excited and eager to read it lol
man... im glad everything turned out the way it did :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2011 6:39:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say, when I started looking up story's on the internet after I wrote mine and I found yours,I was shocked when you had written about InuYasha and Kagome having a daughter too ( In a very different way!) I was shocked how obsorbed I became in your story, I got angry when the character were angry, I just about jumped for joy when InuYasha and Kagome found out about having a baby girl, and it really gives you a good insight on how things could be. Thank you so much for writing this, your an amazing writer, and keep at it.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 6:22:50 PM Title: Chapter 41
this is one of the best stories i've ever read... way to go you! XD
Date: 31 Jan 2011 2:05:53 AM Title: Chapter 41
YAY!!! HAPPY ENDING!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 1:17:05 AM Title: Chapter 41
Man I love this story! I'm kinda sad it's over but it sure was fun! I hope you continue to write. I'd love to read a new story!
Author's Response: Thanks! Actually I've posted 63 stories (some very long ones too) on another site. I never got around to posting them on this site. I will eventually, but if you'd like to read more of my work check out Inuyasha-fiction.com and just look up authors and DanaRose31382. I always use that name on all websites. I hope you'll take the time to check it out! :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2010 1:42:23 AM Title: Chapter 41
Awe. I loved it. Bravo.
Author's Response: Thanks! :) And yeah with Kagome being loud and having kids with sensitive hearing (and noses) it's no wonder. LOL :) Glad that you enjoyed the story!!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 10:15:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
I knew it would happen. But what do they expect with Kagome being hella loud with her children with super sensitive hearing. Lol. Good story. Love it so far.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks! Sorry that I haven't responded in like FOREVER. I have been recovering for the last year from illness. Plus some things were said about me that weren't true. I have tons of new stories posted on another site if you're interested in them. I will eventually post them here but I don't know when. If you want to check them out check out Inuyasha-fiction.com. Just look up authors and DanaRose31382. I have a ton of stories there that aren't here. Sixty-three in all so far. :) I hope you take the time to check it out!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2009 11:35:42 PM Title: Chapter 41
Internet service stinks! :P Sorry I didn't review, I'm on my laptop since my internet is not working. Sigh... anyway, I'm glad everything worked out well, even though I wanted InuYasha to be the Inu no Taishou, but oh well. I enjoyed and will catch up on your AU! Thx for the great story!
Author's Response:
I wanted Inuyasha to be one too, but considering how he acts about his father and such I didn't think he'd want to. And your welcome for the story! :)
Don't give up on my AU. You're probably far behind. But don't give up because everyone says it's my best story. :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2009 6:21:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
FINALY TI'S OVER. LOL i loved the storie it had it's ups and downs i felf sorry for kagome when all her kids moved out bu t hopeful she can have more and be happy. Keep on writing! even thoe this storie is done i hope you release others in the future. i had fun with this one great job
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm definitely going to keep writing! Don't you worry. The story I'm working on right now is an AU story. If you wanna check it out it's called The Victim and the Hanyou Detective. Everyone says it's my best story so I highly recommend it! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this story! Thank you for your reviews! :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2009 4:09:22 AM Title: Chapter 40
yea!!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :) HEHE Tomorrows chapter will be the last I'm afraid. WAAAHHH!!!! :( But it was a fun ride!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2009 1:24:31 AM Title: Chapter 38
Look's like dragging InuYasha back through the well is helping! I'm sorry to hear that this is the last of the trilogy, but I will continue to enjoy till the end! :)
Author's Response:
Yep! Dragging him home is definitely helping! :) Hopefully he'll get his memory back soon! :) And yeah it's sad to see this story end. When I started writing this plot I thought it would just be one short story. Then I ended up making a sequel and a third installment! Yikes! :) Origionally Ayako was never planned. Then I decided to go back to the story and throw a pregnancy into the mix. :) It grew from there. This story only has 41 chapters so we're almost done! Hopefully you won't be too sad when it ends! :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2009 2:07:22 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oops, sorry should have told you that! :) Its my new story, Taiyoukai InuYasha Chp. 4. Just curious will there be a stroy after this one, or will this be the end story here? I am really enjoying this story plot, so I am just dying to know how this will all turn out! :)
Author's Response:
Actually the story ends here. Unless I could think of something else, which I doubt. But there will be a sequel to my AU story. :) teehee! I'll check out your story when I get a chance :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2009 11:07:53 PM Title: Chapter 36
i realy hope inuyasha gets his memories back in the next chapter i don't like the cold inuyasha.
Author's Response: He's not really cold. He's just confused, :) Hopefully things will be all right :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2009 10:12:53 PM Title: Chapter 36
I got only one thing to say..."uh oh!" :) Poor InuYasha, when one loses memories, it can get ugly! :) Since your such a good Inu/Kag lemon writer, can you see if mine is any good? It was my first one. :) I too get embarressed when writing lemons, I hope it came out good. 10+ Can't wait for next update! :)
Author's Response: Sure! I'd love to read it! Which chapter and story? Is it in the Broken Soul story? If so which chapter is it? Let me know!
I use to get embarrassed when writing lemons too. I would blush furiously and hide lol. :) But I got over it by writing them more and more. Just tell me which story and chapter and I'll take a look at it. I'm still trying to catch up to you in Broken Soul. I don't have much time to read since I spend all my time writing, but I absolutely love the story! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2009 10:33:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
shooot dang por inuyasha i hope he gets his memories back in fact i am almost positive you will give them back because the storie would kinda die with out them.
Ps: thanks for agreeing to read my storie. It's called Hell's Curse
Author's Response: Yeah, the story kinda would die with him not getting his memories back wouldn't it? And your welcome. When I get a chance to read your story (hopefully today or tomorrow) I'll leave you reviews! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2009 2:49:24 PM Title: Chapter 35
ack!!!!! holy schnikes!
Author's Response: lol! I know I'm a bad bad girl. Hasn't poor Inuyasha been through enough? Oh well! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2009 10:58:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
thanks for all the help i guess my computer was having some problems with the internet because it kept shutting down but i fixed if so it worked. here's a breif summary of the main idea of the story.
Sesshomaru has a hard time balancing his anaoyance with his little brother inuyasha. toss in a Fiary TWIN sister and a curse in college and his life is about to her a whole lot harder can he handel it? His twin's name is natomie.
Natomie is a party girl in college studying how to run buisnesses but what will happen when her father askes her to take over the buisness instead of her twin sesshomaru? can she turn him down? toss in the fact that she is curssed with the responsibility of being the god and gardian of hell what will she do? can her friends and family still excep her? will she ever find love? read the story and find out.
Author's Response:
Sounds good! I'll definitely check it out when I have a chance! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2009 7:25:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
ooooh i hope inuyasha can talk some sence into her and please tell me the next chapter goes through it all i don't think any of us can stand to read the next chapter and not find out the answere to the question will she come back. do you think you can do me a vavor and help me with some thing?
im working on a story but i've added a few characters and people like kagome sango and miroku are demons. two people that i have added are shumaru a young fox demon with a quiet nature and black hair. and natomie the twin of sesshomaru. she has a bit of a different apperence she has inuyasha's ears and a long silver tail. she takes after the inuyasha in your story she is warm but has a short temper and can become even colder than sesshomaru when crossed. she is a party girl and loves her brothers. her conflect is she is trying to be her self but her father wants her to take over the family business because she is a little faster and stronger than her brothers. the setting is college but with a few twists do you think you could review it and tell me what you think of the story so far?
Ps: how do i post it? every time i try it gives me some stuff about it going into a closed series? can you help?
Author's Response: I think the next chapter (if memory serves correct) is of Inuyasha trying to help Ayako. As for your story I would love to review it, but you have to tell me the title. Now the way you post is you go to account info and then go to add story. Once you go there you have to fill out all the information. The rule is you can only put six characters or less in the summary. That doesn't mean you have to use so few characters in your story. Just choose the characters that are mostly in the story to put in the summary. Then you have to chose if it's a romance story or action or whatever. You have to fill out EVERYTHING on the page. Then copy and paste the chapter into the story text section. You can add some authors notes and ending notes if you want. But everything else needs to be filled out. Then press add story and it should go through! :) Hope this helps!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2009 3:25:03 AM Title: Chapter 33
oh god i hope She realizes and wakes up her parents would e destoryed
Author's Response: Yes they would. They'd be heartbroken. Hopefully she WILL wake up. :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2009 9:57:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
great story i hope akayo gets over this stupid grudge agenst her dad it's not rite to be mad at him. although i can imagen how she must feel about it and i agree with her parents tatics on not telling her because she never asked for the full story. i also think its time her parents sat her down and fixed her atitude.
Author's Response: I hope she gets over it too. And I totally agree with them hiding this from her too. In my opinion it's not something she needs to know. And they have tried the talking with her over her attitude thing before Fiji attacked her. They would have already said something again, but Inuyasha is reluctant because of the reasoning behind her behavior. He still blames himself and thinks he deserves it. Anyway, that's why he doesn't tell her off. Hopefully she'll get over this hang up soon! :)
Date: 08 Apr 2009 5:00:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
i agree with other people's reviews because akayo should watch her toung. but i also wonder what will happen when she sees the rape for her self. great job 10+ how often do you post?
Author's Response: I agree too. She should definitely have more respect. I post everyday. So look for new chapters daily! :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2009 1:46:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
Ohh, bad Ayako! She should treat her father with more respect! If I were InuYasha I would hit her upside the head for such back talk! :) I make InuYasha a more protective and commanding father, I can't really write him crying over the matter, but that's why I read your story! I wonder how Ayako will react when she sees the rape, through the spell cast by the witch. I can't wait! :)
Author's Response: Well Inuyasha is different in this story because the rape had changed him drastically. I always make him protective and loving, but not so sensitive. I never make him hit his kids because I personally think that's wrong. But I've made him more forceful in other stories where he and Kagome have kids. :) Anyway. that's why he's upset so easily. :)
Date: 06 Apr 2009 2:24:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
i dont like that akayo did it so early but what the heck?. whats don is done i just hope she dosnt turn into a slut or a hore that would really suck. but one thin confuses me when inuyasha wanted to take kagome as a mate he had to ask sesshomaru so shouldnt inuyasha's pups have to ask him?
Author's Response:
Yes. That was or will be mentioned at some point in the story. Kagome asks why Inuyasha was so worried when they needed his permission anyway. The problem is sometimes if a mating is attempted without permission it works. That's why he was so worried about that. :) And don't worry. I don't plan on making Ayako a slut :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2009 9:54:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so sorry to hear your not feeling well. :( Hope you feel better, and I will wait patiently for the next update. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for being so patient! I'll be updating tomorrow morning! The docs said somethings wrong but that I am not in immediate danger so that's all well and good. :) Thank you for the well wishes!
Date: 02 Apr 2009 10:24:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes. Okay!!! .........How?
Author's Response:
You can make yourself known by writing some Koga stories! :) Try it! I bet you'll get more readers than you think!